Taniya_K Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 Gosh was that beautiful. I'm not a crying person but I have a lump in my throat I loved how you integrated the poem into it too. Absolutely brilliant. I can't believe that this is the first thing that you've ever written. You should definately write more. xoxo Quote
LAURZY! Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 Awwww!! really sad but beautiful at the same time! Really well written, i loved how you out the poem in it Brilliant, i hope you do more Quote
jenlee Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 You know I love it And I love what you did with the poem. Really good job Quote
Lise Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 Awww shucks! Thank you so much for the lovely comments. I was so nervous about posting it. Quote
dee83 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 I think that was beautiful it really explained how Martha was feelings and the way she felt about Jack which I think is great cause not too many people will express what they feel for their husband/wife so I think its great Quote
Zetti Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 Wow. There arent many oneshots of Martha about Jack or Jack about Martha but this one made me cry, I loved the way you wrote Martha's feelings and how she wasnt going to be able to move on with Jack, I dont know how to sum it up but it was a very powerful oneshot and I hope you write more in the future. Quote
HAA Girl 08 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 Lise, that was just... WOW! It was so emotional, very moving. Very, very powerful and I hope you write more fics, because I'll be definetly reading them! Brilliant! Quote
Barbara Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 That was such a powerful, emotional and sad oneshot! I loved the way you described Martha's feelings. It's almost like I can feel her pain and sadness. Putting that poem in this oneshot was a great idea. Well done Lise! Quote
wrongturntaken Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 wow, this was so beautiful and powerful. I loved the poem... was so sad. I hope you write more, you're really good! Quote
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