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Gosh was that beautiful. I'm not a crying person but I have a lump in my throat :(

I loved how you integrated the poem into it too.

Absolutely brilliant. I can't believe that this is the first thing that you've ever written. You should definately write more.


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Wow. There arent many oneshots of Martha about Jack or Jack about Martha but this one made me cry, I loved the way you wrote Martha's feelings and how she wasnt going to be able to move on with Jack, I dont know how to sum it up but it was a very powerful oneshot and I hope you write more in the future.

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