LAURZY! Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 Awww so glad they talked Yeah i was wondering if Nicole as with Aden as well? Loved Nicole lol Brill update as per Quote
wrongturntaken Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 Awesome chapter! I LOVED that ending! The phone call was perfect! I liked Belle and Geoff's chat as well, it was quite sad. Can't wait for more! Update soon! Quote
jdoddy Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 Liked this chapter, hopefully Nicole & Geoff sort themselves out.. and same for Aden & Belle, can't wait to find out what happened to make them grow so far apart.. Melody is a bit of a spare part in my opinion, its obvious Geoff doesn't feel for her the way he feels for Nicole.. Anyway, Brilliant Update - Loved all the conversational bits in this one, really well written - Can't wait for the next installment Quote
karter Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 LAURZY! said: Yeah i was wondering if Nicole as with Aden as well? They're not together but because they're so close, they live together and are naturally flirty (like they are in the show), people often assume it (especially if they're jealous say like...Belle ) Thanks for all the comments guys, next chapter should be up tonight. Quote
Zetti Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 Awesome chapter, I love the way you space the scenes out Quote
xGlowingAngelx Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 Again, I commend the way you've written the Melody stuff. Feels like she's clinging to hope that she's what Geoff wants, but it's so obvious she's not. Loved Aden's teasing when he entered the room. Such an Aden thing to do! Another great update! Quote
LAURZY! Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 Nooooo!!! lol why did he say yes?!!?! I'm so glad Belle and Aden are talking, i still haven't got a clue what she did Brill update, really looking forward to reading more! Quote
Lise Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 Reveal hidden contents I'm probably completely off track but I get the feeling that Belle cheated on Aden with Angelo. It's good that Belle and Aden are talking again. Quote
KaiyaBlake Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 ^^ Ooh yeah maybe that!? I'm happy Aden and Belle are talking, wish they would just go out already haha Geoff you're stupid Melody is not going to make a good wife, no way. Great Chapter, More soooon please? Quote
wrongturntaken Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 Great chapter! I can't believe Geoff said yes, what an idiot!!! Love the way you have Aden and Belle talking again. Update soon! Quote
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