Picnic - Take Two (by Barbara) - comments

[dee83]

That was great you could write a sequel to this fic but I guess thats upto you

[KaitieL]

You know I love it. J&M fluff.

Now why couldn't that have happened in the first place. Then we wouldn't have had to put up with Marman.

Look forward to reading (and proofing) more of your fics.

[LAURZY!]

Awww that was so sweet

That should definately of happened in the actual show!! lol

That was really great!

[KaiyaBlake]

Jack and Martha are the sweetest

I wish that had happened on the actual show!!

Great fic, I loved it

[Zetti]

Honestly I loved it, please write more soon

[stephyrose4]

Aww! J&M Fluff

It was so cute Barbara, you should think of starting a fic

As everyone else was saying, YES that should of happened on the show, then we wouldn't of had to put up with Sam and Roman

[Barbara]

Thank you so much for the lovely comments. I'm glad you liked it.

Look forward to reading (and proofing) more of your fics.

I'll keep that in mind if/when I write another fic.

[Yankee White]

Loved it.

I wish that could have happened. Then, possibly by some chance Jack might not have been dead!

Hoping for another one-shot soon!

[homeandawayforever23]

That was great.

Yes I agree, it should of happened in the show.

You should write more fics.

[Mistified]

I really enjoyed that Barbara. Sad reading it now thinking of him gone