wrongturntaken Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Great story! I'm loving it so far! Why did Aden feel he had to break up with Belle though?!?!? Poor Belle! I loved that last bit with her shouting at Angelo and then she still has a picture of her and Aden in her wardrobe! And Aden HAS to be okay! I loved how Roman defended him as family in this chapter! Please update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Awww Roman! I hope he wakes up soon!!! Hate Angelo!! Brill update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Hate Angelo here! Loved Roman protecting his family and all that he said/thought about Aden. Hope Aden wakes up soon! Cannot wait for more. xoxo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Great fanfiction. Poor Belle. Hope Aden will wake up soon Aww Roman is such a cute spunk caring for his family and treating Aden like a son Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokkafella125 Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 good update! angelo grrr i hate him! are you going to be updating soon? cant wait for more x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CS2402 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 It had been over a week, and Aden was still in his coma. Belle, Nicole and Roman had spent most of their time at the hospital hoping that he would eventually wake up. Roman had sent Nicole and Belle home, they hadn’t slept in days. Belle drove them both back to the beach house, Geoff had been Nicole’s rock for the past week and even though he and Aden didn’t get on he realised how much Belle and Nicole loved him and no matter what he would support them both. Belle had got a shower and was drying her hair when Nicole knocked on the door. “Are you ok Belle?” “I’m fine, just worried in case anything happens to Aden” “Dad said he would ring if anything did” As soon as Belle put her head on the pillow she fell fast asleep. Waking up she looked at the clock, 10.24am she thought to herself she had only been asleep for about 6 hours. “Morning love, how did you sleep” Irene asked her “”Fine, I thought I would off slept longer than 6 hours” Irene looked at Belle, “Belle you have been asleep for 2 days” “Why didn’t anyone wake me?” “Look Belle, Angelo thought it would be best” Right on queue Angelo walked in “Morning” Belle walked up to him, glaring as she did “What the hell gives you the right to run my life?” “Belle I was worried about you” Just then Nicole appeared from the stairs, “Belle that was dad on the phone” “Is Aden Ok?” “We need to get to the hospital” Grabbing her bag and car keys, she looked at Angelo and said “If anything has happened to Aden and I wasn’t there I will never forgive you” And with that Nicole and Belle stormed out the door. Arriving at the hospital, Belle and Nicole looked at each other. As they walked into the room the first thing they noticed was nobody was in Aden’s bed anymore. “Aden’s dead” was all Nicole kept saying, having heard enough Belle slapped her hard across the face. “I’m so sorry “ Belle said to Nicole All of a sudden they heard a voice “Who would have thought two gorgeous women would be crying over Aden Jeffries?” Surely it couldn’t be him, both turning around they saw Roman and then below him Aden sat in a wheelchair. “Missed me princess” to which Nicole ran over to him, slapping him on the head. “What was that for?” “For making me worry like that, never ever do it again” “I won’t” Nicole hugged him, whispering into his ears” I’ve missed you” Then he looked over at Belle, he didn’t need to say anything. Belle walked over to him and bent down and kissed him full on the lips. Roman and Nicole looked at each other whilst smiling “I think we better give them some space Nicole” to which Nicole replied “I think we better get them a room more like”. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokkafella125 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 aww that was so Good! cant wait for more! update soon! merry christmas! x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 omg i thought he was dead for a minute!! They kissed how sweet That was really good!! absoultely loved it Still cant be doing with Angelo Cant wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 yay!!! Aden's alive! :D awwww they kissed now they just have to get back together! argh, Angelo is so annoying! loved Nics comment at the end :lol update soon xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Awwwwwww! Yay, he's all better! Loved that last bit! They kissed!!! Cannot wait for more! xoxo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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