Life On The Inside (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[LAURZY!]

Loved the Blle/Geoff convo!!

Belle needs to tell Aden her side of things!

Plus Nicole needs to talk to Geoff aswell

Great update

[xknomex]

I loved the Belle/Geoff conversation. It was brilliant! It made so much sense!

I hope Belle goes to see Aden, even if it is to say what she said to Nic.

I also hope Nic and Geoff talk.

Update soon

xxx

P.S this fic is amazing!

[rfran]

I'm really pleased you wrote this I think the Belle Geoff interaction was really well done, gave you just enough time to think it was going to be self absorbed Geoff before he came good, so like him to do that at an unexpected moment

[whispered_envy]

This is such a well done fic. I really wish Belle and Geoff had a conversation like that on the show! I really love how you're writing the characters, it's brilliant!

[Adelle2008]

You write really well. Keep up the good work!

[LAURZY!]

Sorry, i missed the last update!! Geoff and Nicole were

I am slightly devo'd you broke them up lol, but you did it in quite a sweet way

ADEN!! im starting to think you really really dont like him he's not had much of a break in prison has he??

Cant wait to read more (i think )

[leah1234]

sorry i forgot to comment yesterday

i love this fic even though everyone i love is getting hurt

so sweet about geoff and nicole!!!!

updte soon xxxx

[Slade]

I know this isn’t a competition but with so many other Aden/Belle/Adelle fanfics, to be honest I think it’s risky taking Belle out of the equation like that (you possibly stand to lose up to two thirds of your audience). And as predicted you have decided to exact your revenge – “Those who live by the sword die by the sword”.

I bet you enjoyed writing that part.

Let’s see what chapter 7 has in store…

[Louise_2983]

I missed the last update too! I'm not happy you broke them up but I understand Belle's reasoning and I did see it coming what with this being your fic And I can't really complain seen as I have them broken up in my fic too!

[Red Ranger 1]

Hi, everyone!Welcome back, thanks for commenting, I now feel suitably loved.Glad no-one hated the break-up too much and hope people trust that I know where I'm going with this and won't brutalise Aden for no reason.

And, in case there's anyone who hasn't noticed, I like being risky.Or rather I spend days not sleeping, being off my food, thinking "If I do that they'll all kill me!"And then do it anyway.

Don't think I've fallen flat on my face yet...

Try and update soon.

Edited November 30, 2008 by Red Ranger 1