Taniya_K Posted November 9, 2008 Report Posted November 9, 2008 Ooooh, what does Elliot want? Great start. I haven't seen many Geoff/Nicole stuff around so this'll be a treat! Can't wait for more. xoxo Quote
Deborah Posted November 9, 2008 Report Posted November 9, 2008 Good start, wonder whats in the letter! Loved Nicole saying bout dating a minister being sexy Looking forward to more. Quote
xknomex Posted November 9, 2008 Report Posted November 9, 2008 I wonder what Elliot wants!?!? Love Aden being all protective and brotherly. Update soon xx Quote
Zetti Posted November 10, 2008 Report Posted November 10, 2008 Oooh Eliot is back Sounds intriguing. Aden being all protective Quote
whispered_envy Posted November 10, 2008 Report Posted November 10, 2008 Great start! I wonder what he wants with her...Aden is so cute! Quote
Zetti Posted November 12, 2008 Report Posted November 12, 2008 That was an incredible chapter. Short but effective Quote
Taniya_K Posted November 12, 2008 Author Report Posted November 12, 2008 Great chapter! I agree, short but effective! I loved Aden's last line. I just hope that Nicole goes back and opens the letter, although I dunno if she would... Loved the bit on teh beach too! Sappiness is good lol! Anyway, more soon! xoxo Quote
Deborah Posted November 12, 2008 Report Posted November 12, 2008 Great chapter, glad Geoff is looking after Nicole. Still wondering what on earth Elliot wants!? Update soon please Quote
meant2live Posted November 12, 2008 Report Posted November 12, 2008 oooh love this, its really interesting more soon please Quote
karter Posted November 13, 2008 Report Posted November 13, 2008 Thanks for all the comments guys I've added on something extra to the end of the last chapter, I decided it fitted better there, next chapter should be up soon. Quote
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