KatieroxNZ Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 (edited) N'awwwww!! That was soooooo cute!! Really well written, so realistic! With Juno it started with a chair. For me, he slept with her so I slept with him. It seemed like a good idea at the time. Ehehehe! That bit made me laugh Lucas was the cheese to my macaroni, the Bleeker to my Juno. I tugged on his shoulder and pressed my lips against his cheek, before wandering slowly back to bed. That was my fave part.... Too cute! xxx Edited November 23, 2008 by KatieroxNZ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karter Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 So cute and yet so tense at the same time. Love it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luc Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 So cute and yet so tense at the same time. Love it ^^ I agree with that . I loved it Jen. It was written beautifully, and as Katie said, realistically Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 Thank you Katie, Karter and Andrew. Your comments are much appreciated. I absolutely love the movie Juno and Mattie/Lucas is one of my all time favourite pairings, so it seemed like a good idea to write something like this. I'm not really fond of writing "lovey dovey" scenes either, so it's good to know that they seem realistic . Thanks again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 (edited) Great one-shot Jen. I love the way you described Mattie's feelings during the whole fic. It was very well written. I wouldn't have minded a baby Mattie/Lucas if they had been a bit older. It would have been so cute! Lucas was the cheese to my macaroni, the Bleeker to my Juno. That was so sweet! I love that quote! Juno is a great movie and when I read the title of your fic, I just had to read it. Edited December 9, 2008 by Barbara Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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