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You spoil us Bec, with all these updates. Not that I'm complaining :P.

Another great chapter. I like how you show both Belle and Aden's side of things as well as how her friends are reacting. It must be tough on them, not knowing what to do.

That bathroom scene was so amazingly written. Totally powerful and painful at the same time. Keep writing.

EDIT: I also forgot to add that I like how you also write the Irene/Roman scenes. It's nie to have both adults and teens dealing with the issue and the different ways they approach it.

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Belle... I really dunno what to say. It was all so great and shocking and moving... I really hope that someone finds her again.

The detail that you go into makes it so much more effective, and somehow, much more empathetic.

I'm looking forward to Belle finally revealing what it was that happened to her, but I know that the build up to it and everything else is going to be just as great.

More soon please.

xoxo

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First Annie and Aden now Nicole and Aden. Don't tell me Geoffs next. I kinda don't mind Nicole and Aden. It will interesting to see whats going to happen there next.

For some reason though the lightheartedness on the beach felt a little out of place especially right after Belles confession. But I guess there was a reason for it since it was all leading to Aden and Nicole sleeping together.

Poor Belle thinking she would be safe once she got put in the clinic only to have him come there. Atleast now we know why exactly shes doing this to herself.

Please update soon.

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