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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :wub:

both those chapters were just so beautiful, well written and Im so glad Aden and Belle are ok now!

update soon

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Aww, that was so beautifully written again, made me cry!

You are such a talented writer, & yet you seem to think your chapters are not always "quite what it should be." I am no expert but to me, everything you have written has just been excellent!

Keep up the good work & I look forward to reading more :)

Edited by Deborah

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Something felt right about it to me lol it was great Very sweet

Although i really hope Aden doesn't go to jail :(

Great update

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Oh no! His court case! :o I hope he makes it through it ok! I don't want him to go to jail... They've been through so much!

Great update as always. I don't know what you thought that it wasn't, because it certainly was. You really can do no wrong [unless you break Adelle up!]

More soon please!

xoxo

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*tear* That was written so beautifully.

You are one talented writer! wow.

I really really hope that Aden doesn't go to jail! I don't think I would cope! :(

Please make it okay!

Update soon

xx

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As Belle ran her fingers slowly across Aden’s bare chest she couldn’t help but marvel at his ability to sleep at a time like this.

This bit just took my breath away, it was amazing :wub:

I loved that chapter, I was wondering when Aden's court case would be mentioned

Update soon, Im hooked on this! :)

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