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Chapter 15 - Belle should have told him, but at least Aden knows about the baby at least

Chapter 16 - You wrote that chapter so well, especially Aden's reaction at the end

Chapter 17 - AWWWW, So cute, glad Aden didnt leave :wub:

Chapter 18 - Superbly written, loved the interaction between Aden and Roman, even if there was little dialogue lol

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Awww the ending was so sweet...Aden buying the outfit with the cute message on it...awww that was so awwww :wub:

I had to giggle when Belle hit Aden with the pillow!!!

Another awesome chapter, Belle's anger came across so real...I am really enjoying this fic, you are doing a fantastic job..And I cannot wait for more!!!

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