LAURZY! Posted November 17, 2008 Report Posted November 17, 2008 That was really good!! very funny Poor Geoff Hope you do more one shots like this, your good at writing them Quote
Taniya_K Posted November 17, 2008 Report Posted November 17, 2008 Aw, I love your one-shots! They never fail to make me laugh! Lol at Belle hitting Geoff and him not knowing how to play. at Nicole being able to heaer everything and her mocking their relationship. Sweet! xoxo Quote
adelle Posted November 17, 2008 Report Posted November 17, 2008 lmao! Loved it You write so well, that was hilarious! Quote
Louise_2983 Posted November 17, 2008 Report Posted November 17, 2008 (edited) That was hilarious! I love it, I am literally lolling! Edited November 17, 2008 by Louise_2983 Quote
Jen Posted November 18, 2008 Report Posted November 18, 2008 “Just enough trouble to be worth it.” I really liked that. It seemed very realistic in terms of how all four characters interacted. I especially lied that ^^ line . It was very simply written but I really enjoyed that. Quote
Lise Posted November 18, 2008 Report Posted November 18, 2008 That was good. Very funny. Geoff made me laugh. Quote
jdoddy Posted December 30, 2008 Report Posted December 30, 2008 That was one of the funniest things I have read all evening, and it makes a change to all this miscarrigey, emotional stuff you see plastered here - nice bit of comedy makes the world seem alot brighter! Brilliant oneshot and written well in the fact it keeps to the characters and especially the dynamic of Nicole & Geoff's relationship 'just enough trouble to be worth it' and 'no, just good looking' - are vintage lines for Nicole, yet we know she loves him really! Quote
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