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“Just enough trouble to be worth it.”

I really liked that. It seemed very realistic in terms of how all four characters interacted. I especially lied that ^^ line :D. It was very simply written but I really enjoyed that.

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That was one of the funniest things I have read all evening, and it makes a change to all this miscarrigey, emotional stuff you see plastered here - nice bit of comedy makes the world seem alot brighter!

Brilliant oneshot and written well in the fact it keeps to the characters and especially the dynamic of Nicole & Geoff's relationship

'just enough trouble to be worth it' and 'no, just good looking' - are vintage lines for Nicole, yet we know she loves him really!

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