Deborah Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Aww what a great epilogue! Was like at Christmas thinking you got all your pressies, really happy, then you find you have an extra one just as good, lol Looking forward to your sequel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 AW! That was adorable! I totally forgot about the epilogue. Loved every bit of it! Esp the way he told her about his life ending until he fell in love with her In answer to your question, my favourite part was them getting back together and Belle's 'game'. That was an awesome idea! Cannot wait for the sequel. xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emma_2006 Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 There is nothing to criticise about your writing! ALL the chapters are amazing I love them all I loved the Epilogue, how Aden told Belle about his mum was so sweet and how much they love each other is amazing all i have to say is AOL Thank you so much for your chapters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkeysmoke Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 That put a really nice finish on it. I would like some longer chapters please? (only criticism I can think of, and fine one to talk am i) but basically Im just being greedy and want more. Is that so bad? Ooooo sequel. Sounds like you're setting it quite far into the future? Should be interesting! can't wait. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 That was so beautiful! I was almost in tears WOW as I said before, I loved the whole fic! xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adelle Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Awwww, loved it! Perfect way to end it. I loved the comment that Aden made saying that his life started again when he fell in love with Belle So fantastic and beautifully written, no criticism from me, I love your writing style so don't change it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rfran Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Wow just read last chapter and epilogue last chapter so sweet and the epilogue what can I say, it brought a tear to my eyes, very emotional can't wait for your sequel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAM27# Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 The last chapter was so cute with Aden making Belle go through the window..it was totally different to what I had thought Aden had done in Belle's room!!!! The epilogue was beautiful...I had tears in my eyes....it was amazing!!!! Awesome work on finishing the fic..cannot wait for the sequel!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted November 11, 2008 Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 Aww loved the ending! I can see you posted a sequel to this fanfiction and I am off to read it now. I loved reading this fanfiction Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whispered_envy Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 (edited) Aww! I started reading the sequel before I had commented on the ending of this! It's really perfect- I love how they helped each other so much, you write Adelle perfectly! Thankyou for writing this! Edited November 13, 2008 by whispered_envy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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