Lise Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 That was great. Nicole's just being a good friend to Aden. Hopefully Geoff will understand that in time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rfran Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 Thanks for the comments I love to hear what you all think, gets me motivated to continue writting, which is somthing I never thought I'd do (I'm dyslexic and not very confident). I need to edit the next chapter to make sure it isn't gettin to heavy, cause it could. I'll try and get it posted tomorrow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted November 18, 2008 Report Share Posted November 18, 2008 any chance of an update tonight? xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted November 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2008 *tears* That was so powerful. I've got tears in my eyes. The beginning was beautiful, and then it got sad. Poor Aden. Ben. I can imagine that. More soon please! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted November 18, 2008 Report Share Posted November 18, 2008 Awww, that last line was so sad This fic is great, its so sad, but quite intriguing at the same time Really cant wait to see whats gonna happen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted November 18, 2008 Report Share Posted November 18, 2008 that last line just brought me to tears!!!! Ben *tear* poor poor adelle! update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meant2live Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 loved the fluff... but adens pain more please love it soooo much Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beate Posted November 20, 2008 Report Share Posted November 20, 2008 Loved the Adelle moments. I feel for Aden. Hope he comes back to the bay soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted November 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2008 That was so beautifully written. I have tears in my eyes, and that's saying a lot. I'm glad that you did it from Belle's POV first. But gosh, that's so sad. I can't believe what happened. I know this is just a fic, but it's still so sad! And the contrast between her life then and now was really good! I hope we get to see that day from Aden's POV? And maybe who the driver was [or isn't that important?]? I wanna know so much more now! Like, why did Aden leave exactly? Wow... I dunno what else to say. I really can't put into words how much I loved it. Cannot wait for more. xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted November 21, 2008 Report Share Posted November 21, 2008 wow, just...wow. That was written so beauitfully. I'm lost for words, that was so amazing and heartbreaking. That is sooo sad!!! wow. update soon xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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