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Cant believe that was only a oneshot!!!!

i loved how you wrote the dialogue, made it seem very real and emotional

Loved it :D

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Oooohhh That was brilliant!! I could really see that happening if Sally was still there when his abuse came out. You had Aden spot on, his reactions, his breakdown, everything, really well written :D

I was so excited when I saw this was a new one of your fics :D

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Cant believe that was only a oneshot!!!!

Yeh, maybe you could continue it..... XD

That was amazing. So sad!

When it came out about the abuse I really wanted Sally to be staying so she could find out, because all she saw Aden as was a bully.

:D

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That was brilliant! I really loved how he ended up telling her.

It would have been interesting if they did it that way on the real show. Not that I don't like the way they did it on the show. heh

Well done

xxx

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I agree! You should consider continuing this. But as a one-shot, it's awesome!

Loved the way it all came out, and his anger at the end. Perfect.

xoxo

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Aww, that was wonderful. I always wanted him and Sally to bond...but then she left. :( That was very emotional...poor Aden! Loved Sally's reaction...it was spot on! I can't believe this is only a one-shot! Loved it. :)

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Aww, that was wonderful. I always wanted him and Sally to bond...but then she left. :( That was very emotional...poor Aden! Loved Sally's reaction...it was spot on! I can't believe this is only a one-shot! Loved it. :)

ditto Sally was awesome and that was like there only scene together.

ah *reminisces over Sally*

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