LAURZY! Posted October 30, 2008 Report Posted October 30, 2008 Cant believe that was only a oneshot!!!! i loved how you wrote the dialogue, made it seem very real and emotional Loved it Quote
adelle Posted October 30, 2008 Report Posted October 30, 2008 Oooohhh That was brilliant!! I could really see that happening if Sally was still there when his abuse came out. You had Aden spot on, his reactions, his breakdown, everything, really well written I was so excited when I saw this was a new one of your fics Quote
MissOlivia22 Posted October 30, 2008 Report Posted October 30, 2008 Cant believe that was only a oneshot!!!! Yeh, maybe you could continue it..... XD That was amazing. So sad! When it came out about the abuse I really wanted Sally to be staying so she could find out, because all she saw Aden as was a bully. Quote
xknomex Posted October 30, 2008 Report Posted October 30, 2008 That was brilliant! I really loved how he ended up telling her. It would have been interesting if they did it that way on the real show. Not that I don't like the way they did it on the show. heh Well done xxx Quote
honeychild Posted October 30, 2008 Report Posted October 30, 2008 that was so good!!! you cant just leave it as a oneshot, you just cant!!!! Quote
Taniya_K Posted October 30, 2008 Report Posted October 30, 2008 I agree! You should consider continuing this. But as a one-shot, it's awesome! Loved the way it all came out, and his anger at the end. Perfect. xoxo Quote
whispered_envy Posted October 30, 2008 Report Posted October 30, 2008 Aww, that was wonderful. I always wanted him and Sally to bond...but then she left. That was very emotional...poor Aden! Loved Sally's reaction...it was spot on! I can't believe this is only a one-shot! Loved it. Quote
Deborah Posted October 30, 2008 Report Posted October 30, 2008 That was brilliant, so emotional. I also can't believe this is only a one-shot! Loved it Quote
monkeysmoke Posted October 30, 2008 Report Posted October 30, 2008 Aww, that was wonderful. I always wanted him and Sally to bond...but then she left. That was very emotional...poor Aden! Loved Sally's reaction...it was spot on! I can't believe this is only a one-shot! Loved it. ditto Sally was awesome and that was like there only scene together. ah *reminisces over Sally* Quote
homeandawayforever23 Posted November 13, 2008 Report Posted November 13, 2008 That was amazing! Very well written, you wrote Aden perfectly. I liked how it came out and how he tried to avoid it. Quote
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