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And I'm Aching (by honeychild) - comments

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Yep I liked this, was a good idea the letter, well done :)

Like at the start its all angry & bitter & by the end it ends on a positive.

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As someone who has written letters to people who can't or don't receive them for longer than she cares to remember I thought that that was really great

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Wow...that was good...I could really feel all the hate and anger coming out of the computer screen, and the determined nature of Aden to tell his grandad he can get past it! Great work!

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I loved that last line. It just fitted well with the whole thing.

Great one-shot. You seemd to have captured his emotions and feelings so perfectly...

Loved it!

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