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The Angels Will Look After You (by meant2live) - comments

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Your oneshots are amazing. You really capture the emotion and establish the characters in such a short space of time. Very moving.

“I love you mum.” She whispered softly, barely above human hearing level as the tears streamed down her face, never once easing up. She didn’t need to speak loudly, there was no one there to hear. Just a body on a slab. “I’ll miss you.” She knew there was no point wiping her tears away, because they would be replaced by new ones as soon as she moved her hand away.

^ Simply loved this bit. So well written and heartbreaking.

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Thank you Jen.

I just find oneshots easier to write and they seem to be doing their job lol

Glad you like it, and yeah that bit was one of favourite bits as well. :D

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That was......................

Beautiful... so emotional, raw

The way you wrote everything almost had me in tears and not many fic's do that very often :)

Great writing

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Thank you Matticus. Glad you liked it

You know I've noticed that I keep saying thank you and glad you liked it when everyone keeps saying it made them cry or almost cry... hmmm I hope its a good thing lol.

But yeah thank you for reading it and for the feedback

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That was simply beautiful, from her disbelief to her acceptances and the realisation that this was her final moment with her mother, your writing is beautiful. You made her grief tangible.

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Thank you Lustre... glad you thought it was beautiful.

And tangible... i haven't heard that word since i was at 6th form 3 years ago lol... my teacher always used that word... i miss that word lol

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