Taniya_K Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 Aw, thank you. I knew that it was Jai! Am disappointed you're not carrying on with this, but I'm loving your other two fics so I guess that last chapter in this was a great way to end it. xoxo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adelle2008 Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Yeah sorry I got tired of this fic! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Really liked this piece but got confused when you started on all the past relationship stuff between Rachel & Geoff - probably because I didn't see it coming and also the fact it doesn't conform to his on screen character, on the show he took losing his virginity very seriously and here he seems not to care. But that's Fan Fiction for you and like others who have read this story I liked the MSN style conversation between Belle and Rachel, it gave everyone a chance to absorb the events (the proposal and pregnancy) yet still kept Belle in the picture. If I was being extremely picky I would have liked to have seen some back story to how Rachel, Geoff, Roman and Annie know each other, of course - it could have been there and I just missed it - that would be a nice continuation to this piece. It was also very good to finally see a Fic that included Nicole / Geoff because alot of them seem to involve Adelle. Have you finished writing this or are you still updating - its just its very good, but you said you got bored? ***** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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