adelle Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 This is fantastic!!! Really beautiful, you capture their emotions perfectly! Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 This is really good. I like how he kept asking her why she was there. It's like he was challenging her to admit she still loved him. I love that he is going to win her back. Can't wait to see how he is going to do that but with the way Belle feels around him I doubt he is going to have to work too hard. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mk1diva Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 great start! That had me in tears awwh u go win her back Aden!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 She had told him she only wanted to be his friend, but it had been so hard without him. Every time she was with Angelo, all she could think about was Aden, his smile, his face, his eyes, the wrinkles in his torso, his smell. *sighs* don't we all? brilliant fic it even might keep you off the hook for having writers block... if you update soon (both ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whispered_envy Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 This a beautiful start! You really captured their emotions towards one another perfectly. I really wish this would happen in the show! Can't wait for the other two parts! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solaris Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 Beautiful, emotional writing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 Aw! Can't wait to read the rest of it! So glad that she realised how much she missed him. Much better than H&A atm! Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 Love this! Love them! That was brilliantly written. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 “I tried to move on…’ She whispered up at him as he began stroking her hair, sending shivers down her spine at his touch. “I even started dating Angelo… but… nothing is working…’ she swallowed a hard lump in her throat. Aden cupped her cheeks as she looked up at him. “Why did you come here…?’ Aden asked again, knowing full well that he was going to get the truth out of her this time. “Because… because I love you…’ Belle whispered as tears started trickling down her cheeks. OK, that was seriously cute I hope everything goes OK. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maccaz Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Oooooooohhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! Update ASAP. :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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