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Really good update.

From Aden's lack of modesty, to not being able to stop himself from staring down the front of her dress, to lifting their hands so that they were palm to palm Aden is just a mixture of everything in this fic. Flirty, sweet, heartbroken, hilarious, jealous, and little full of himself (even if that one is just him teasing).

I laughed so much at Aden's jealousy, wanting to hit Zac with the chair.

Poor Aden losing the number. I just saw that happening when I read Zac came up to him by the pool.

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Soon I promise, hopefully tomorrow night, NZ time. I've had a bit of writers block as to how to go about the next chapter. I know what I want to do, I'm just having trouble getting it written. In the mean time I did post a short one shot so for anyone who didn't read it...Twenty Seven Bobby Pins

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