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Nothing Left But To Say Goodbye (by valli) - comments


MissOlivia22

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Somehow, I knew from the beginning it was them two, but gosh that was just so sad. The way you wrote it, so short and not-so-sweet, it was captivating. I've actually got that sinking feeling in my stomach like something bad really has happened to Aden. I'm gonna need to go and read some fluff now!

Great one-shot.

xoxo

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That was beautifully written. The descriptions of Belle's pain was perfect. It was so sad- I really felt the grief emanate out of the page.

ETA: I like how you don't find out exactly how he died. You don't need to- the pain through Belle's words is enough.

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