Nothing Left But To Say Goodbye (by valli) - comments

[MissOlivia22]

*Wipes away tear*

That was beautiful.

If only it wasn't a one shot and you could delve further into it.

You should write more, your brilliant

[Taniya_K]

Somehow, I knew from the beginning it was them two, but gosh that was just so sad. The way you wrote it, so short and not-so-sweet, it was captivating. I've actually got that sinking feeling in my stomach like something bad really has happened to Aden. I'm gonna need to go and read some fluff now!

Great one-shot.

xoxo

[Cerise]

That was so good! Your brilliant at this descriptive stuff, aren't you? Some rough spots, but it was very good and very emotional. Love it. <3

[xknomex]

*tears*

wow, at first I thought that he was just going away or something but when I found out he was dead... *tear*

that was so beautiful.

wow

xx

[whispered_envy]

That was beautifully written. The descriptions of Belle's pain was perfect. It was so sad- I really felt the grief emanate out of the page.

ETA: I like how you don't find out exactly how he died. You don't need to- the pain through Belle's words is enough.

Edited October 14, 2008 by whispered_envy

[J+M4EVA!]

wow this is realy good

aww poor Belle and poor Aden

i loved this it was really good

[mk1diva]

omg what can I say that was so beautifully written and captured all of belles pure emotions I was there with her i was crying aswell Aden dead cant believe it!!! You should do some more coz that was so good

[jenlee]

That was wonderful. So sad but so well written. I agree with Cerise, the discription was fantastic. Great job

[adelle4eva]

one of the best oneshots ever!

definetly going on my top 3

you should write more oneshots like these

[wrongturntaken]

I have tears in my eyes, that was so beautiful! excellent writing!!!