Louise_2983 Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 I liked Nicole in that. Its awesome she kinda reminds me of old school feisty belle. haha. Those two are more alike then either of them would like to admit! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 loved that chapter. was awesome, great update. more soon please... hope Aden & Belle sort things out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.X. Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 This fic is AMAZING!!!!! brilliant update!!! i hope adelle and nic and geoff get back together soon!!! cant wait for the ball!!!!!!!!! xxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 (edited) Once again an AMAZING update !!!!!! How do you write like that? I cant wait for the ball. Maybe Aden and Belle can have a little dance?? I also cant wait till the talk they all have, Nic/Geoff and Belle/Aden! Update soon xxxx Edited November 30, 2008 by xknomex Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Loved it!! Hope Nicole talks to Geoff, and Belle and Aden talk! Brill update, cant wait to read more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Took me a while to get through that one but it was worth it.All the conversations were very well done. And I can definitely believe no-one in Summer Bay listening to Geoff's side of the story... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Thanks for the lovely comments everyone Sorry I know that was quite a long chapter but I wanted to get everything in there as the first scene of the next chapter is one I'm dying to write! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Dont apologize for it being too long!! The longer the better! ooo I cant wait till the next chapter! xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 (edited) You said you were standing by what you said and if you really meant it then you should and I respect that but theres something you should know. Certain people, you especially, have a real talent for making me feel responsible for Aden. Like everything he ever does, every word he speaks and every reaction he has are all because of me. Adens his own person, he existed a long time before he met me. I didnt create him, I dont control him and I certainly dont owe him anything. I love that Belle said this. It is so true especially in this fic. I loved this chapter. I felt Belle was alot more in character here. I love the way she didn't apolgise for leaving. And even admitted that it was the best decision for her. The way she dealt with Nicole in this chapter reminded me of the fiesty person that she is. The scene with Aden was really good as well. I love that you added that scene with Rachel. It was my favourite in this chapter. I'm not a Rachel fan on the show but I like her here and hope we get to see more of her(and Martha as well) and Belle interacting. Those scenes make it okay for me to just ignore these occasions when Belle finds herself getting involved in all this highschool teen angst type of stuff. With all the serious types of things shes had to deal with it's nice to see her spending time and interacting with the little older characters who have more life expirance and will probably be able to relate to her more. That Aden/Belle, Belle/Rachel, Belle/Nicole(well the beginning of it anyway when she was standing her ground and sticking up for herself)scenes reminded me of why I love Belle and this story. Hope she continues that way. Aden was very mature in this chapter. Hes certainly come along way. It was good to see him be so understanding. I'm glad, he as well, knows Nicole cares for him but she should still have not interfered because it was not her place to have a go at Belle no matter how much she seems to think it is. I'm probably in the minority here but I hope Belle doesn't tell Aden how she feels. It would be good for Aden to go out with someone else and then decide on his own whether or not he wants to be with her or not without knowing that Belle wants him back. I like Leah and Angelo being together. Enjoyed this chapter(most parts of it anyway) and looking forward to the next one. Edited November 30, 2008 by enjoy the ride Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Enjoyed this chapter(most parts of it anyway) and looking forward to the next one. Lol you're difficult to please I'm glad you liked most of it anyway. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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