rokkafella125 Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 yay! x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 That last line just made me burst into tears! seriously i have tears running down my face!!! WOW! I hope Belle come's back soon,! LMAO about If Irene was younger, brillaint!! Update soon xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 Aww.... I'm glad that she told him she was leaving, even if it's only because he turned up there at the right time. Poor Belle though, I understand her wanting to just be herself and get away. That last bit with the 'B' was sweet. And the kiss. I just hope that she doesn't stay away for too long. More soon please. xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 God, that last bit had me tearing up!! I hope she comes back soon, once she's sorted her head out Love Irene Great update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leah1234 Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 i had this huge sinking feeling going through me the whole time until the last part hope she doesn't stay away for too long update soon xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 Wow.I thought that was really good and Belle's reaction is so believable.Liked her conversations with Irene and Martha.Nice bit of symbolism at the end. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rfran Posted November 26, 2008 Report Share Posted November 26, 2008 Wow your fic is really sad, hope that she works out that she can't realy cope with being away from Aden. Hope there back together soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted November 26, 2008 Report Share Posted November 26, 2008 (edited) I really enjoyed this chapter. Love that you added some humor with Adens card. Belle and Irenes talk was really nice. It was nice to see her being so involved in Belles life. Good to see Belle sticking up for Amanda. Feel so sorry for Aden. But atleast that end with her giving him that charm can give him some hope. Martha and Belles conversation was good as well. We rarely get to see these two interact in fic and in the show so it was a nice surprise. Martha was really wise to and unlike in the show I actually liked her. Edited November 26, 2008 by enjoy the ride Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAM27# Posted November 26, 2008 Report Share Posted November 26, 2008 Wow what a chapter!!!! That was so good, and the ending was fantastic but so sad!!! “Irene, you don’t even like him! You were always on Team Angelo. In fact you were head cheerleader! ” Belle exclaimed, glaring at Irene accusingly. Hehehe that line made me laugh!! I loved Irene and Belle's interaction!!!! You wrote it so well Louise_2983!! We both lost our babies. Babies we were having with men other than the ones we were in love with” Martha replied matter of factly. Hehehe they have a lot in common!!! I also loved how you wrote Belle and Martha's interaction!! Both Martha and Irene's interaction with Belle was so realistic!! Cannot wait for more...update soon please!! I am interested to see what Amanda is like in this fic!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokkafella125 Posted November 26, 2008 Report Share Posted November 26, 2008 im sorry i didnt reply yesterday! it wouldt let me sign in anyway... the update... it was amazing i actually cried! anyway i hope belle comes back i loved this part "As her car became nothing more than a speck on the horizon he gradually unfolded his palm to find a tiny charm lying against his warm skin. Somehow torn from its counterpart, a silver letter B rested in his hand." it was very well written cant wait for more x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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