adelle Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 “The God Squad giving you a hard time?” I loved that line, awesome!! This is really good, I wonder what's up with Geoff, maybe he has a thing for Aden... Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bexxx123 Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 good start, wonder why Geoff doesn't like Aden so much. nice bit of family dynamics at the beginning, good to see them all interacting together, we don't see that too often even though they all live in the same house. 'The God Squad' , that was so funny!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solaris Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 After reading (and properly reviewing) shattered, I've been looking forward to you starting another fic...you just made my day Having enjoyed the first chapter, I am now anticipating the next installment :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted September 6, 2008 Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 That was good. I wonder what's up with Geoff? Does he like Aden? Can't wait for more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 6, 2008 Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 I loved it. Welcome back, mate. Adelle so cute. I hope Geoff better get used to it, lol. Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted September 6, 2008 Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 Kewl This is good. Does Geoff have a crush on Belle? Or Aden? Either way, you write the tension well. [“Is this about me?”Aden looked concerned.“Do you want me to have a word with him?” “Would that word be something along the lines of ‘Be nice to my girlfriend or I’ll knock your block off’?” Aden grinned sheepishly.“Yeah, probably.” “Then I think it’s probably a good idea if you don’t. Classic Adelle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Lynd~ Posted September 6, 2008 Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 ''The God Squad'',lol. Good start,i really enjoyed Shattered so look forward to more of this. Update Soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted September 6, 2008 Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 oooooo intersting! am loveing this Fic!!! however i am not liking geoff! ADELLE FOREVER Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solaris Posted September 6, 2008 Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 (edited) Bombshell ending! I have the distinct feeling that this is going to get very interesting! Looking forward to the next update Edited September 6, 2008 by solaris Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted September 6, 2008 Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 Oh, Aden's not going to like that... can't wait for more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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