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Kewl :) This is good. Does Geoff have a crush on Belle? Or Aden? Either way, you write the tension well.


“Is this about me?”Aden looked concerned.“Do you want me to have a word with him?”

“Would that word be something along the lines of ‘Be nice to my girlfriend or I’ll knock your block off’?”

Aden grinned sheepishly.“Yeah, probably.”

“Then I think it’s probably a good idea if you don’t.

Classic Adelle :)

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