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Please update RIGHT NOW!!!! I love how you've actually explained why Kirsty and Aden felt that connection when they first met!

I loved the dialogue in this chapter! It was so realistic with the way Larry was speaking to Irene and Kirsty! (It usually is! lol)

Please please please update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

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Please update RIGHT NOW!!!! I love how you've actually explained why Kirsty and Aden felt that connection when they first met!

I loved the dialogue in this chapter! It was so realistic with the way Larry was speaking to Irene and Kirsty! (It usually is! lol)

Please please please update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Yep, you all saw it coming! :P I was going to change the plot to surprise everyone but it was too good a plot line to resist so i kept it how it was.

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Please update RIGHT NOW!!!! I love how you've actually explained why Kirsty and Aden felt that connection when they first met!

I loved the dialogue in this chapter! It was so realistic with the way Larry was speaking to Irene and Kirsty! (It usually is! lol)

Please please please update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Yep, you all saw it coming! :P I was going to change the plot to surprise everyone but it was too good a plot line to resist so i kept it how it was.

I'm glad, because it's amazing! Are you going to update again soon/today??

Edited by wrongturntaken

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Two more chapters!!!!! I hope you don't leave it too long before posting The sequel.. I wonder if Aden will tell Roman or Belle before this one is finished.

update. Like, now!!?

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Why does it seem like im the only one who didnt see that coming? lmao

That was sooooo good, i loved all the dialogue between the charachters

Cant believe there's only 2 more to go, really looking forward to the sequal :D

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Just read the last two chapters.

I knew that they were related! But wow! The way you wrote it all... I actually felt sorry for Larry, until he became a jerk and told Kirsty not to tell Aden. I hope he does find out.

Cannot wait for the last chapter *tear* I hope it answers many questions, but knowing you, you'll probably end it on a cliffhanger and then leave it until the next series! :(

But, I can't wait to read it anyway.

xoxo

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Only one more chapter to go :'( Thank god theres a sequel. Will it be up tonight.... ?

I love how it took Aden a while to actually call Roman properly :D

He’s my brother. Her mind screamed at her.

Awww!!!!!!

Update soon!

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OMG! I can't wait for the finale!!!! It was so sad when Aden realised he didn't have many people to call. I'm glad he called Roman though, and i'm glad that Larry seems to be sobering up and trying to patch things up with Aden. I wonder what Irene will think of what Aden is doing??

Please update soon!! I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

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