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How on earth did you come to the conclusion that this chapter was not all that good?

I loved lighthearted Adelle. The banter between them is awesome. There are a few Adelle writers who are able to truly make you feel like your reading something that could pass for the actual Home and Away script and you are definetely one of them. So I don't think you need to worry about chapters not being good enough.

I love that Annie is gossiping with Aden. I keep imagining what that would look like. And he knows where everyone is even when she doesn't, how cute is that.

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