Taniya_K Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Aw! That ending -Roman's thoughts- was so heartbreaking! Update soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Thank God he is OK. I need to give him a hug, the amount of times I have said that tonight haha. I love how protective Roman is of Aden. Update soon. xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Great chapter! You made the scene at the hospital really realistic! I loved Roman's thoughts at the end! Please update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frogg Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Aww great chapter. Roman is a smart man! I love any Roman/Aden fics and this one is one of the best! Its brilliant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissOlivia22 Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 I'll come back and most likely edit this later. It's quick, Im going out. Sorry for any mistakes or crapness XD After staying in Aden’s room for a few hours the previous night, Rachel had suggested to him that he should go home and get some rest. He reluctantly done so, but returned the next morning after his shift at the Diner to see how he was, and to see if his dad had turned up. “Any change” Roman asked Rachel as he entered. “Nope, nothing yet. He’s still unconscious but you can go see him if you want” “Is his dad here” Roman asked cautiously. If he was, he didn’t want to cause a scene “He turned up a few hours ago drunk” Rachel said grimly “We had to send him away” “Ok, thanks” Roman said sighing and heading towards Aden’s room -- He was confused and uncomfortable, but he couldn’t bring himself to move or open his eyes. He lay there for a moment listening but all that he could hear was what sounded like pages being turned. He moved his head slightly, still not opening his eyes and let out a small groan as eh did so, his head throbbing. He felt someone move towards him, but not knowing who it was. He opened his eyes slightly and saw a relieved looking Roman above him. “Hey mate” Roman said “I’ll be right back” Aden followed him with his eyes as he left the room before returning to look around the room. He was in a hospital. He hated hospitals. A few moments later, Roman returned with Rachel who began to check him over “Hey Aden, can you tell where you are” “Hospital” He muttered quietly “Good, now what’s the last thing you can remember” Aden thought hard, the last thing he could remember was arguing with his dad “Fighting” He said weakly “With who” Rachel asked. “Dad” He said “He’s not here is he” He trailed of as the sentenced reached the end. “No he’s not” Roman pitched in and Aden let out a sigh of relief “Do you know when that was” Rachel asked and there was a moment pause as Aden struggled to remember. “Uhhh. Thursday” He said which left Roman there confused. The argument at Aden’s house was on Thursday, what about when he dad came to Romans. “ You sure mate” Roman interrupted as Rachel began to speak “Yeh” Aden answered even more confused that he doubted him “What about the argument at mine” He asked but Aden only shook his head. If Aden couldn’t remember that argument, then he didn’t know that Roman new the truth about his past Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 Oh, no! That's not good! I hope Aden remembers soon... otherwise how's Roman gonna help him? xoxo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frogg Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 Uh Oh he lost his memory. Poor Aden! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 My poor Aden! at least he woke up. but he has to remember so Roman can help him! Update soon. xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 any chance of an update? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Oh no! Poor Aden, great idea though! excellent writing once again, please update when you get back too!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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