bexxx123 Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 WOW, just wow!! you had me in tears by the end of that, it was amazing. the extracts at the end were so emotional! I love the friendship between Aden and Melody. That scene on the beach was so good, Aden just breaking down and Melody comforting him. Best one shot I've read!! Quote
whispered_envy Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 That is really an amazing story! You've captured Aden brilliantly. I really love how you've written him- you've justified the choices he's so well! The ending was perfect. Really, it was a great story. Quote
xknomex Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 wow!!! that was amazing!!!!! great writing, nearly had me in tears Quote
mk1diva Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 wow that nearly had me in tears by the end it was amazing and that would be a best selling book! love the way he spoke about belle in it and melody how she was ther for him! great fic thumbs up x Quote
wrongturntaken Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 WOW! I can't believe you actually managed to make me cry! The extracts from the book were so beautifully written especially the one about Belle, this was an amazing premise for a story and the way you've written it makes it work really well!! Quote
princess.sparkle Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 Thank you all for your wonderful comments. It's great to find out what people think and I'm glad you liked it . Quote
jenlee Posted September 3, 2008 Report Posted September 3, 2008 That was really great. You write beautifully and the story itself is really unique. Just really great work Quote
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