sarahandkatie Posted August 5, 2008 Report Posted August 5, 2008 (edited) Oh My god, I was actually filling up! This is supeb I hope you continue, never ever thought of putting jack and rachel together but I like it an awful lot! Edited January 30, 2016 by QUIET ACHIEVER Quote
dee83 Posted August 5, 2008 Report Posted August 5, 2008 Great so far but when Jack was on about the sunrise to Lily he could not have only said that when she hears that he will be there but her real mum aswell cause shes lost 2 of her parents to cancer so this might give her sum comfort.Hope your gonna continue with this cause its great update soon Quote
zzazzb Posted August 9, 2008 Report Posted August 9, 2008 That was amazing! so sad though well done, is this ever going to be more than a one-shot? it was fantastic Quote
QUIET ACHIEVER Posted August 11, 2008 Report Posted August 11, 2008 What an emotionally charged, gut wrenching and tearjerking fiction. It is brilliantly written and it definitely left a tear or two in my eyes and the best thing is that it makes me want to read more. I do hope that you are considering to write more one-shots or some short fics as they are definitely well worth reading and there aren't too many Jachel or Holden family fics around either. Well done and look forward to seeing more of your writing. Quote
princess.sparkle Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 Thank you all sovery much for your lovely comments. I'm so happy that people actually liked it . I wasn't actually sure if I could follow it up as anything other than a oneshot but I've been thinking about writing another related oneshot a few years into the future when Lily's older and she's missing her parents. Hopefully I'll be able to post it soon depending on whether I manage to finish it and whether it's any good . Anyway thank you again for reading and posting . Quote
dee83 Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 Yeah I think that would be great if a follow up was done of Lily in the future missing her parents cause this 1s been great so if you do a follow up I can`t wait to read it Quote
princess.sparkle Posted August 15, 2008 Report Posted August 15, 2008 Just to let you know I've done a follow up called Loving You, hope it doesn't ruin this one . Quote
princess.sparkle Posted August 23, 2008 Report Posted August 23, 2008 Just wanted to let you know that there's a prequel up called Making Memories . Quote
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