Georgia Posted September 9, 2008 Report Posted September 9, 2008 Home and Away Fan Fiction This is set after the Olympic Cliffhanger and probably contains spoilers for people outside Australia. BTTB rating: T Type of story: Undecided Genre: Romance, drama, a mixture basically ----------------------------------- indicates a change of person Chapter One: The alarm buzzed loudly, signaling that it was 7am. Aden Jeffries swung his legs out of bed, turning off the alarm. He shouldn’t have even bothered setting it, he never had trouble waking up anymore, just getting to sleep. Aden headed towards the bathroom, unintentionally making no noise, even though he now lived by himself in the Summer Bay Caravan Park. Ever since he and Belle had broken up, he couldn’t stand being around people. Belle was the only one that understood him and without her his life wasn’t worth living. However, Roman and Irene were still depending on him to cover the breakfast shift at the diner, so he threw on some clothes and headed towards the pier. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- On the other side of Summer Bay, another alarm buzzed but this time the owner didn’t bother to get out of bed. Belle Taylor had become a hermit ever since she had split up with Aden. Belle still loved him but after what had happened, there didn’t seem to be any way forward. She shook her head, determined to get those thoughts out of her mind. There was no use thinking about Aden and their relationship because he had obviously moved on. Whenever she went around to talk to him or saw him at the diner, Nicole seemed to be right at his shoulder. That was probably what hurt her the most, the fact that their love didn’t seem to have meant anything to him. Frustrated at herself for bringing it all up again, Belle jumped out of bed and after a quick shower and change of clothes, ran to the diner for the breakfast shift. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- if any one likes it i will write more
adelle4eva Posted September 9, 2008 Report Posted September 9, 2008 WRITE MOREE!!!!!! update!! it seems very interesting good start
solaris Posted September 9, 2008 Report Posted September 9, 2008 Aden and Belle meet at work maybe? You have to update asap
adelle Posted September 9, 2008 Report Posted September 9, 2008 This is great, please write more...there is no such thing as too many Adelle fics!! Poor Aden, living by himself in the caravan park
Georgia Posted September 9, 2008 Report Posted September 9, 2008 BTTB rating: T Type of story: Undecided Genre: Romance, drama, a mixture basically Thanks 4 ur comments, I had already written chapter 2 so here it is Chapter Two: Aden rushed into the diner, already late for his shift and ran straight into Belle. “Ouch, watch where you’re going” Belle started to say but then trailed off when she saw Aden. She gulped. Aden flashed a half-hearted grin at her but they both were really hurting. It was so hard meeting like this, without Aden taking Belle’s hand or Belle flashing a disgusted look his way before giving him a light kiss. Aden cleared his throat. “Sorry Belle, I was rushing to get here and I had things on my mind. My dad called last night”. Belle had a confused look on her face, this wasn’t the Aden she knew and loved. Her Aden (she had to stop calling him that) was overly confident and could always make her smile. This Aden seemed sad, worried, lonely and depressed. “Aden, what happened”? Belle asked. “Why did he call”? As soon as Belle asked this, Aden completely snapped. “It’s none of your business, you don’t want anything to do with me so stop pretending that you care”. He spun on his heel and stormed out of the diner, heading for his special place on the beach. Little did he know that someone was following him, someone with a vengeance, someone who was determined to make him pay, all because he had fallen for Belle Taylor. ------------------------------------------------------------ Im only doing small chapters cos they are quicker to write …. I will keep posting if I get positive comments
amz89 Posted September 9, 2008 Report Posted September 9, 2008 loving this poor aden it was all happy fics now there all break up 1s more sonn please. xo
xknomex Posted September 9, 2008 Report Posted September 9, 2008 loving it!!!!!! dont hurt Aden:( please continue
Georgia Posted September 9, 2008 Report Posted September 9, 2008 BTTB rating: T Type of story: Undecided Genre: Romance, drama, a mixture basically Chapter Three: That afternoon Aden had spent hours on the beach, just thinking about how his life had fallen apart. Every now and then he had felt eyes burning into the back on his neck but whenever he turned around, there was no one there. -------------------------------------------- Angelo had stood on the pier for hours, staring at Aden Jeffries. That morning they had received a threat against Aden, so Angelo had to watch him. It was challenging though. Angelo really liked Belle but whenever he saw her, it was obvious Aden was playing on her mind. It was difficult to give 100% to this task, especially as Belle seemed to be getting more distant from him. However, even if Angelo wasn’t paying a lot of attention to Aden, he had noticed this one guy with a fishing rod, constantly staring at Aden. Angelo was sure it was nothing and finally left the pier, heading over to Belle’s place, hoping to convince her to come out with him that night. -------------------------------------------- Belle finished putting on her pajama pants and shirt. The day had been a tough one. Aden had completely snapped at her and Angelo had kept pestering her for a date. Just then, the phone rang, snapping Belle out of her head. “Hello, this is Belle speaking” she quipped. The phone crackled in response. “Hello, is anyone there?” Belle asked “Aden Jeffries was a big mistake and now someone is going to pay” a deep voice said before the phone went dead. Belle couldn’t identify the voice before the phone cut off and stood, shocked, in the middle of her room.
bexxx123 Posted September 10, 2008 Report Posted September 10, 2008 OMG!!! what's going on??!! Can't wait to find out what's going to happen. Someone's threatening Aden, how dare they!!
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