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O.M.G.!. I can't believe you did that. Well, actually I can :P It was just so brilliantly written, I literally had my mouth gaping open as I read that last part. It seemed so natural ... but also unnecessarily awkward, which is why I really like that chapter! :) Everything just gets so much more complicated now.

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Oh my God, you made me live that!

I've helped friends work though stuff like this and you've done an amazing job of capturing the emotions, I'm looking forward to seeing how you progess the storyline.

What an amazing update.

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I usually hate the idea of Aden and Belle with anyone but each other, but i just want to keep reading your writing!

“Things that I can barely stand to talk… Or even think about,” he said, forcing himself to stay strong and as calm as possible, “Things that I still, after all this time wish I could just forget because it controls my life every day…”
that bit was sad :(

update soon

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