Jen Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 O.M.G.!. I can't believe you did that. Well, actually I can It was just so brilliantly written, I literally had my mouth gaping open as I read that last part. It seemed so natural ... but also unnecessarily awkward, which is why I really like that chapter! Everything just gets so much more complicated now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adelle4eva Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 :angry: i dont like you :angry: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 Wow! Very interesting but very good! Also, very shocking! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dean Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 Wow, what a way to end it. Keep up the great work Eli, this story seems realistic and I feel as if I am there listening to all these events go on around me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 OH.MY.GOSH What about Adelle But that aside, that was really well written and .. captivating. update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 OMG!! please update soon!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 Ohh, and the plot thickens! Good job Eli! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solaris Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 (edited) Oh my God, you made me live that! I've helped friends work though stuff like this and you've done an amazing job of capturing the emotions, I'm looking forward to seeing how you progess the storyline. What an amazing update. Edited August 24, 2008 by solaris Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 mmmmm do i want Gaden or Adelle?? erm.... Adelle, but you prob wont write it like that. great update!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 I usually hate the idea of Aden and Belle with anyone but each other, but i just want to keep reading your writing! “Things that I can barely stand to talk… Or even think about,” he said, forcing himself to stay strong and as calm as possible, “Things that I still, after all this time wish I could just forget because it controls my life every day…”that bit was sad update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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