jenlee Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 That was great, you should keep going with this as I really think that more you write the better it is going to get...even though it's already amazing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 Well, I think I am going to leave it as a oneshot, I think it just reads better as one. But I probably will write more Adelle fanfiction, I still have the sequel to WIITY to consider, and I have another one in mind too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eli Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 Seriously, that was extremely well written! It was just really beautifully written, had me completely captured from beginning to end. And so heartbreaking, I just love how you ended it! And unlike a lot of the others who have commented to this, I think this works better as a oneshot than it probably would do as a longer fic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted August 19, 2008 Report Share Posted August 19, 2008 Lovely story. All that self hate from Aden makes me incredibly sad. While it would be good to see you update this, I think I might just love this staying a one-shot. It just makes it more powerful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted August 20, 2008 Report Share Posted August 20, 2008 Aww yay, thanks you two ~~~ Yep, so like I said this will stay a oneshot, it was written with the intention of being one so I think it reads better as one, besides I don't think I could write a follow up chapter to that. Besides, I do not have time for another long fic right now, especially since I've adopted a huge task, see Writer's Assistance Thread. So yeah. But thank you soooo much for your kind comments (They're the best comments I've ever got I think, and it's surprising I was slightly drunk and hungover at the time I wrote it ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted August 21, 2008 Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 (edited) i swear i commented this before but it doesn't seem so.. but anyway, back to the story. WOW. that was fantastic. you wrote it so well and it was so moving. but you wrote that while you were slightly drunk and hungover , thats a fair effort considering how good it is. well done EDIT: I think it's great the way it is, you don't need to make it longer. Edited August 21, 2008 by zzazzb Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valli Posted August 21, 2008 Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 And you say you're a bad writer? What does that make me? A horrible writer? Seriously Kat, that was awesome. And you wrote it while you were slightly drunk?! Oh geez... There's just no word that'll describe how good that oneshot is. Wow and amazing just doesn't do it. So I'll just say I'm speechless and you can take that any way you like Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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