adelle Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Poor Aden Belle make him better!! Who is the mystery guy?? Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Poor Aden Belle make him better!! Who is the mystery guy?? Please update soon If it's Angelo I will scream! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jessica_2005 Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, POOR POOR Aden. AWwww. Feel sorry for himmm. Hope he and Belle get back together. Whos the new guy??????? Who is she fallig for? Angelo, Drew. Someone else????? Update asap. Love Jess xoxo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adelle fan. Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 seriously i can't stop reading this. poor aden you should put another chapter up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 That was absolutely incredible. You have already got me hooked. I feel like you were able to show how heartbroken and lost he feels now that Belle has left him without it being sappy. I wonder who this new guy is. I hate him already. I probably should be angry at Belle but I'm choosing to believe that Aden is still the guy she loves and theres another reason for the break up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Great writing! I loved what you did with 'this wasn't supposed to happen". Very intriguing, i can't wait to see what happens now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whispered_envy Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 Thanks guys! There should be another chapter up soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whispered_envy Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 Here's the next chapter! Chapter Two: Aden walked heavily down the corridors of Summer Bay High, eyes fixated on the floor. Around him, people chatted to their friends, gossiping about the latest scandal, but Aden ignored it all. He wasn’t in the mood for all this happiness. He passed Geoff and Ruby talking at their lockers. “Aden!” Geoff called out to him. Stopping and turning, Aden sighed. “What?” “I’m sorry to hear about you and Belle.” Geoff told him kindly. “Why are you sorry, Bible Boy? Unless you’re the new guy that Belle’s falling for, stay out of it!” Aden was frustrated. The last thing he wanted to talk about was Belle. “No, of course I’m not! I just-” “You just thought you would rub it in my face.” Aden growled. “How very Christian of you!” “Aden! I thought we were getting along!” Geoff sounded confused. “The only reason I was getting along with you was for Belle’s sake. Now stay the hell out of my business, Campbell, or you’ll have some real problems on your hands.” And with that, Aden continued on down the corridor. “Real tactful, Geoffrey.” Ruby sighed. “What did I do?” ---- Aden leaned against the balcony, staring out at the sky. He was supposed to be in class, but he didn’t see the point when he wasn’t able to take in one word the teacher said. This was much tougher than he thought it would be. Nicole appeared out of nowhere. “Hey Mopey. Why aren’t you in class?” “Don’t want to be. Why aren’t you?” He shot back. “Gotta go see Bartlett about something.” “Well, you better hurry along like a good little girl, then.” Aden sneered at her. Nicole laughed. “Jeeze, just because Miss Perfect Girlfriend broke up with you, doesn’t mean you have to take it out on the rest of us.” “Oh, shut it Nicole.” “Look, get over yourself. You’re not the only one with problems.” “What? Still haven’t received that pony?” He turned away from her and started walking. Nicole followed him, talking. “You’d think the whole world was against you or something, the way you’re going on about this whole Belle thing! Get over her already- there are other girls out there besides her.” “You’ve got no idea what you’re talking about, Princess.” Aden tried to brush her off. “I’m sick of you moping around the house, and I bet Roman is too. All I’m saying is that you need to get over Belle and move on.” “Well, I’m sick of listening to you. Goodbye Nicole.” Aden headed off down the stairs. “Where are you going? Class is back that way!” Nicole shouted after him. “I know!” Aden called back, before disappearing from sight. Nicole rolled her eyes. Nothing was ever simple with that boy. ---- Walking along the beach, Aden knew that, unfortunately, Nicole was right. He did need to get over Belle, but how the hell was he supposed to do that? It would be so difficult, especially as they worked together. He’d probably even see her with this new guy all the time, and Aden knew it would take great self control not to go up to him and smash him in the face. He had to talk to someone. Someone who knew nothing about Belle. Someone who he hadn’t seen for years, and could give an unbiased opinion on the whole situation. Picking his mobile out of his pocket, he scrolled to the J’s. Pressing the call button, the number dialled quickly. “Hello, Justin? It’s Aden.” He let out a small smile. “Yeah, your baby brother Aden. Long time no speak, hey?” The smile slowly faded off his face. “Listen, Justin, I need to talk to you.” “About everything.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jenlee Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 I love it. The first chapter was amazing and the second one was just as good. I'm so glad you took our advice over at the appreciation thread and decided to write this . Can't wait to read the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adelle fan. Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 Here's the next chapter! Chapter Two: Aden walked heavily down the corridors of Summer Bay High, eyes fixated on the floor. Around him, people chatted to their friends, gossiping about the latest scandal, but Aden ignored it all. He wasn’t in the mood for all this happiness. He passed Geoff and Ruby talking at their lockers. “Aden!” Geoff called out to him. Stopping and turning, Aden sighed. “What?” “I’m sorry to hear about you and Belle.” Geoff told him kindly. “Why are you sorry, Bible Boy? Unless you’re the new guy that Belle’s falling for, stay out of it!” Aden was frustrated. The last thing he wanted to talk about was Belle. “No, of course I’m not! I just-” “You just thought you would rub it in my face.” Aden growled. “How very Christian of you!” “Aden! I thought we were getting along!” Geoff sounded confused. “The only reason I was getting along with you was for Belle’s sake. Now stay the hell out of my business, Campbell, or you’ll have some real problems on your hands.” And with that, Aden continued on down the corridor. “Real tactful, Geoffrey.” Ruby sighed. “What did I do?” ---- Aden leaned against the balcony, staring out at the sky. He was supposed to be in class, but he didn’t see the point when he wasn’t able to take in one word the teacher said. This was much tougher than he thought it would be. Nicole appeared out of nowhere. “Hey Mopey. Why aren’t you in class?” “Don’t want to be. Why aren’t you?” He shot back. “Gotta go see Bartlett about something.” “Well, you better hurry along like a good little girl, then.” Aden sneered at her. Nicole laughed. “Jeeze, just because Miss Perfect Girlfriend broke up with you, doesn’t mean you have to take it out on the rest of us.” “Oh, shut it Nicole.” “Look, get over yourself. You’re not the only one with problems.” “What? Still haven’t received that pony?” He turned away from her and started walking. Nicole followed him, talking. “You’d think the whole world was against you or something, the way you’re going on about this whole Belle thing! Get over her already- there are other girls out there besides her.” “You’ve got no idea what you’re talking about, Princess.” Aden tried to brush her off. “I’m sick of you moping around the house, and I bet Roman is too. All I’m saying is that you need to get over Belle and move on.” “Well, I’m sick of listening to you. Goodbye Nicole.” Aden headed off down the stairs. “Where are you going? Class is back that way!” Nicole shouted after him. “I know!” Aden called back, before disappearing from sight. Nicole rolled her eyes. Nothing was ever simple with that boy. ---- Walking along the beach, Aden knew that, unfortunately, Nicole was right. He did need to get over Belle, but how the hell was he supposed to do that? It would be so difficult, especially as they worked together. He’d probably even see her with this new guy all the time, and Aden knew it would take great self control not to go up to him and smash him in the face. He had to talk to someone. Someone who knew nothing about Belle. Someone who he hadn’t seen for years, and could give an unbiased opinion on the whole situation. Picking his mobile out of his pocket, he scrolled to the J’s. Pressing the call button, the number dialled quickly. “Hello, Justin? It’s Aden.” He let out a small smile. “Yeah, your baby brother Aden. Long time no speak, hey?” The smile slowly faded off his face. “Listen, Justin, I need to talk to you.” “About everything.” i loved that line - great chapter can't wait to read more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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