katef2007 Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 great start love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack+Martha4Eva! Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Thanks Guys i didnt no so many people would like it lol I might most the second chapter later on tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adelle Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Oooo yay! Can't wait Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAM27# Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Me either!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack+Martha4Eva! Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Chapter 2: I dont really like this chapter but oh well anyway enjoy *may not be suitable for young readers* "Aden i cant" Belle said while pushing away Adens hand from her cheek. "Belle its ok he wont ever find out" Aden said leaning in and capturing Belles lips with his then carefully picked her up and placed her down on the bed... Suddenly Belle woke from her dream and sat straight up in her bed and then she turned her head to see Drew sleeping next to her, she carefully got up and walked over to the kitchen to get a glass of water, she walked over to the tap and turned it on filling her class with water, then she felt someone hands being wrapped around her stomach pulling her into a hug. "I woke up and you were gone" Drew said while kissing her neck "Yeh i just needed something to drink" Belle said turning around to face Drew "You can go back i'll be there in a minute" "Ok" Drew said giving Belle a quick kiss before walking back to the bedroom ********* Matilda was making her luch for school it was eight thirty and she was waiting for Ric to come pick her up, she then turned around to put it in her bag when she seen a male figure standing at the door, she reconised him almost straight away "Lucas?" Matilda asked while walking closer"I didnt no you were coming back" "Yeh i sent you a message the other day" Lucas said while walking closer to Matilda "Wait!That was you?" Matilda asked "Yeh and i meant what i said in that message" "Lucas i cant im with Ric" "I love you Mattie" Lucas said leaning in to kiss Matilda but before he had the chance there was a knock at the door which made Matilda jump "Matilda you ready to g......." Ric started saying as he walked in then he noticed Lucas "Oh hey mate i didnt no you were coming back" "Oh um hey Ric yeh i just got back today" Lucas said trying to put a smile on his face Ric just smiled and the room went silent for a couple of minutes before Matilda finally spoke "Ric we better get going before im even more late for school" Matilda said picking up her bad and walking out the front door. "Yeh ok well nice seing you again Luc" Ric said following Mattie "Yeh you to" ********* Belle walked along the beach looking for a nice spot to sit down and take photos of the view she then spoted Aden swiming in the water she then stopped and sat down on the sand and pulled her camera out and started taking pictures of Aden.She looked down on them reviewing each photo when she seen a shadow over her. "Couldnt keep away huh?" Aden said walking up to Belle "What do you want now Aden?" Belle said standing up "Well i seen you looking at me from across the beach so i thought i'd come over" Aden said with a smile "I wasnt looking at you i was watching the water" "Well i mean i dont blame you for looking at you, I mean look at me!!" Aden said with a smirk on his face "Your so full of yourself its actually discusting" "Aww dont be like that i no you want me" Aden said walking closer to Belle and putting his hand on her cheek "What do you think your doing?" Belle said quikly slapping Adens hand away from her face "Listen Belle i want you, you want me so why dont you just get rid of that loser boyfriend of yours and we can be together" "Ok let me make myself clear im going to say this once and once only. You and me never going to happen!!" Belle said walking off from Aden "You say that now!" He called after her with a smile on his face Please let me no what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J+M4EVA! Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Adelle betta get togetha soon!! update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 adelle please update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 "Ok let me make myself clear im going to say this once and once only. You and me never going to happen!!" Belle said walking off from Aden "You say that now!" He called after her with a smile on his face Awesomely written Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAM27# Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Belle is starting to fall for Aden YAY!!!!!!!!! Great fic!!! Update soon as really want to know if Mattie chooses Ric or Luc, and how Adelle get together as they are so meant to be together!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jessica_2005 Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Awww, Belles dreaming of her and Aden together. Awww. Awesome update. Wonder who matilda will choose? Ric or Lucas. I want it to be Ric. LOL. But its Matildas choiceeeeee. Cant wait for moree. Keep up the great work. Love Jessica xoxo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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