xknomex Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 please update ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jessica_2005 Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Thank you for the comments. I am glad people like this fic. Dedicated to everyone who left a comment. Thanks i appreciate it. Chapter 2 Adens Pov It was just a normal day for Aden. His Dad getting drunk on the sofa and him getting beaten up and how his Dad tells him how much he hates him. The memory from last night ran through his head as the fresh blood still pouring down from his face, as the pain on his face searing through trying to hold it in. Not wanting his father to think that he won. Everyday it would be like this in the Jeffries household. Everyday for the past few years or so this was happening to him. What had he done to deserve this? Was he a bad child? Maybe he deserved all this because he was an bad person. These memories he had, locked away ever since his mum died. She was the star of the family, she kept the family together, but ever since she had died, his Dad couldn't take it that she had died. All the time, the abuse he got from his Dad. In the morning not even caring what he did, just acting like nothing happened. And that made Aden really angry. He still took the abuse, he knew he couldn't just walk out the door because no one would look after him. He didn't have any family around here, his dad was the only family he had left. He had friends but he didn't want them to know, he didn't want to think he is weak. So he deals with it everyday. Sometimes Aden just wishes that someone could just know, someone could just take the pain away, someone could help him through his problems, someone who could help him leave, someone who could just love him for him not because of the stuff he has been through. He didn't need pity, he just wanted someone there for him, for the good times and bad. The only good thing in Adens life was his work and school. But it was his last year of school and he would be leaving very soon. At least he had his work, to concentrate on. He had been working part time at the Pier Diner, where Irene and Roman who are his bosses. He gets on with both of them but gets on with Roman. Today he was working at the Pier Diner. It was currently 10.30 and he had 15 minutes to get dressed and get to work. He had decided to wear an white Polo shirt with Blue Jeans to match his Blue eyes and his Blonde hair. His Blue eyes could stand out because they were so piercing anyone would fall in them blue ocean eyes. Aden ran down the stairs of his house and walked out the door. He didn't want to see his dad in the morning. He hated seeing his dad, he hated what his dad was doing to him. But Aden thought he deserved it, it would make him much more stronger. As he was walking past to get to the PierDiner, he saw a Girl with blonde long hair who was wearing Blue jeans with a white dress and a girl with Brown short hair which was up to her shoulders who was wearing a black & white mosaic top with an short green skirt, they were both hugging each other. And a guy with short ruffled brown hair who was wearing jeans and and black shirt who was standing watching them. He thought the Brown haired girl looked gorgeous but he thought she was out of his league. No one would go for him. True, he did have some girls but none of them were serious, he would never get to close to a girl because he was scared of her knowing what was happening to him. Aden carried on walking, and turned back to see the girl again and then he saw her, her brown chocolatey eyes gazing through his Blue piercing eyes. As he quickly turned back around and carried on walking. So tell me what you think? was it good or bad? Comments appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 poor aden love this fic!! update ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissOlivia22 Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Yeh poor aden..... Update ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louisefan Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Good. Please update soon Jessica. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissOlivia22 Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Nevermind XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keelie Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 I'd just say all of the above. UPDATE else I'll.. steal all the food from your fridge! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissOlivia22 Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Yeh, And I'll go gather all mmy strong mascualine freinds to form a mob and come and EAT YOU XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! loving this fic and really want to read more:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bexxx123 Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 love it! keep going. update soon!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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