maccaz Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Nic, Nic, Nic... Update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Southernfan Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 What is Nicole up to i wonder cool update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 CHAPTER 15 Daniel was packing his mothers clothes. "Excuse me, but what are you doing young man?" "Packing your things. You're coming home" he told her "I'm not going anywhere with you" Daniel dropped her bag on the floor "God forgive me for what i'm about to do" he whispered to himself. He walked up to his mother and slapped her across the face. "This has gone on long enough". he yelled as he grabbed her by the shoulders and started to shake her. "I am your son, now i'm taking you home" Rachel came in got took him out of the room. "Are you stupid" she yelled "I can't do this anymore, i know this sounds bad i'm so sick of her" he told her "I feed her, i bathe her i've done this for as long as i can remember. A son shouldn't have to do that to his mother" he sank to the floor and started to cry CHAPTER 16 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maccaz Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Poor Danny boy... Update ASAP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted August 6, 2008 Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 CHAPTER 16 There was a knock on the door. "Expecting someone?" Nicole asked cuddled up to Daniel "No" he said getting up to answer the door "Hey, where's my daughter?" Lindsey said rudely pushing past him "Nice to see you too" he said shutting the door "I want my daughter, where is she?" "Sleeping" "Where?" "Don't just go in there and wake her up" Daniel yelled at her. "What's wrong with you D when i first met you i was upside down and half way to happyland by this time" "What's going on?" Nicole asked "Hmmm, so she's the reason i'm not in happyland. How long you been with her and letting her play mother with my child" "You can go before i throw you out" CHAPTER 17 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maccaz Posted August 6, 2008 Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 Good update - well worth the wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 CHAPTER 17 Daniel walked into the hospital and saw Vincent standing there "What are you doing here?" he asked rudely "I called you both here" Rachel replied "I don't know how to say this" she started to say "Well maybe if you open your mouth and let the words come out" Vincent told her and Daniel turned his head and looked at him as if to say be nice. "Jessica's been having sex with the male patients" she told them both. Daniel let out a laugh but quickly stopped when saw how serious Rachel looked. "Sorry" he said "I hope you intend to do something about this" Rachel said "Absolutely" Vincent said "Not at all" Daniel said at the same time. "Can you give us a minute" Vinent asked Rachel "No need she's not gonna remember what happened with them all anyway" he said and started to walk out. "Hey" Vincent called as they both walked outside Daniel stopped "What?" "I was hoping we could catch up later" "I don't think so" Daniel told him "I just thought i could i could give you father advice" Daniel stopped walking again "From you, no" Vincent grabbed Daniel and threw him up against a car "I've had it with your rude attitude towards me" Vincent told him and started to undo his belt "Get off me" Daniel said trying to get free "I've been lonely" Vincent whispered "Stay lonely" Vincent smashed the window of the car and opened the door and pushed Daniel inside and shut the door again CHAPTER 18 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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bijou Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 CHAPTER 18 Lindsey saw Daniel sitting on the beach with a half empty bottle of whiskey and watched him making patens in the sand with his fingers. "Hey" she said walking up "I'm sorry about the other day. Iwas being rude and seeing with with that Nicole girl made things worse" she told him sitting down "Jelous much?" he replied turning his heard and looking at her "Oh my god, what happened" she said reaching out to his face. "I had an accident" "An accident D half your face is missing" she lifted his head up and saw thumb marks on his neck like someone had tried to strangle him. "Who did thi.." she stopped "It was your dad wasn't it" "I don't have a dad. He dissapeard years ago" he said softly "You shouldn't let him hit you and your mum like that" "Don't you think i try, he just..." "He just what?" "He helsd me down a wouldn't let me go said it was a game. CHAPTER 19 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*caitie* Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 omg!!!! update soon!!! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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