Barbara Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 I love extremely long chapters! Poor Jack! He can't leave. Or he has to take Martha with him. Or she has to tell him "Take me with you". After all, it is the title of this fic! Martha should just tell him how she feels about him and dump Alec! Then she can be happy with a man who loves her and doesn't treat her like a child! More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephyrose4 Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 Jack don't leave! Pllleeeeeeeeease. *begs Rachael* I'll cry Jacky boy can't leave that would just be........ gay! Martha you better not let him go, cos you will end up regretting everything! Awesome chapters! More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted September 1, 2008 Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 Wow! This is goood, thanks for updating finally! haha! Wiping the corner of his mouth, his face frowned, deep in thought. “You know what” he muffled as he swallowed it away, “I can honestly say, this is the best sandwich I have ever tasted” he grinned at her with closed lips. “Oh come on, don’t mock me” she laughed at him, whacking him on the arm. “I’m not! I mean it” he looked at her, his facial expression now straight. Her head tilted to the side again, as she narrowed her eyes, trying to make out whether or not he was being sincere, “fine, well … I’m glad you like it” she said, smiling a little, “Alec never likes the sandwich’s I make” she mumbled, half laughing, half sighing. He looked across at her in sadness. “Well, clearly Alec doesn’t know a good thing when he’s got it” he raised his eyebrows looking directly into her eyes, and they both knew he wasn’t referring to the sandwich. She forced a smile, “Yeah” she replied softly, before distracting herself with the washing up. He finished his sandwich whilst she kept her back to him. OK, loved that bit! Jacky and Martha are sooo meant for each other! I don't like the look of the way things are going. Please keep them happy. And they haven't even kissed yet!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 OMG that was so sweet its just like a movie!! lol, very well written Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 ^ Thanks for commenting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 More soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephyrose4 Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 (edited) Yay, yay, yay, yay, yay they finally kissed!!! And said the 'L' word! Woo hoo. Oh my god, I loved that chapter, it was so sweet. Now they just need to get rid of that idiot Alec, and Alec better not 'decide to come home early' again, and catch them that would be.. so gay! Awesome chap, more please Edited September 10, 2008 by stephyrose4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 That was a very moving chapter! Aww they love each other. And they finally kissed! Martha just has to get rid of Alec and they can live happily ever after! More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 OK, now I could totally imagine that scene on Home & Away!!! Awwww, it was soooo CUTE! Yaaaaay... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 that was amazing! i thought for a minute there yu were not going to give us the kiss, and make us wait another chapter.. but thankfully, you're not that mean but yeah, update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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