vale4eva Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Is powerfullest a word? Well it is now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 ^ Martha has feelings for Jack. And he has feelings for her! I hope Alec will act like a jerk and she'll dump him and won't regret it! Glad Tasha will support Martha. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaitieL Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Is powerfullest a word? Well it is now Touche. I'll add it to my dictionary. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted August 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 Aww cute chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted August 6, 2008 Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 Despite knowing he’d only regret it, he found himself unable to prevent it. Drifting back, he re-found the spy hole. He observed them through a glare as they continued to hold each other. But this time however, something had changed. His glare softened into sad eyes as he looked at her with close inspection. No longer did she appear to have a zest for life, a shimmering glow around her as if she was over the moon with love and happiness. Instead she looked heartbroken, almost lost and in doubt. Looking deeply into her glassy and gloomy eyes, his insides crumbled into pieces. He prayed to know what went on inside that trapped girls mind. Her wishes and hopes for the future. Did they even involve her fiancé? Or was she just sad about something else? Jack guessed he would never know. After all, he was merely a feather in the wind. One of which failed to linger for very long, and when the day came to make a move, it was evident that their goodbyes would unfortunately be set in stone… That was my favourite . . . It was just so, sad, joyful, loving, hopeful . . . The way you wrote it just made every bit of sense and very, very beautiful, sorry I havent commented in a while but I've been reading it all and still love it Well done Rach Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted August 6, 2008 Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 Now now Martha, dont make hasty decisions. Even Alec is showering you with all the gifts in the world, you should reconsider your decision. Ah heck, money cant buy love. And she no love him no more. Martha loves Jacky. Jacky loves Martha Great chapter More please soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted August 6, 2008 Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 She knew now, that her future didn’t belong with Alec, because as much as she adored him as a partner. She no longer craved him, no longer got butterflies when he entered the room, no longer enjoyed the strict safety of the mansion walls and the endless gifts he would shower her with. gosh Martha finally yay. Martha and Jack Update soon, that was really good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee White Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 Hmm as much as i love the this story.....there was no Martha and Jacky in the chapter And in the other hand go Jacky, Go Jacky! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 Martha doesn't love Alec anymore. Now she has to dump him and she can be with Jack. Jack is in love with Martha. I hope Alec will let them be together. Wonder how her family would react when they know about Jack. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 Hope she does get Tashas help to get out of the house to see Jack because she doesn`t belong with that Alec he`s trying to keep her prisoner and not let have any friends or if he does only the friends he chooses her she wants to be free see places shes never seen before and make new friends thats why she likes Jack so much so I think should leave that creep Alec and be the guy she wants so she can live the life she wants aswell update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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