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A gentle huff was released as she contemplated her predicament; either close her eyes and pray the spider wouldn’t creep out and pounce on her in the middle of the night, or remain awake, getting absolutely no sleep and being bored out of her brains.

Taking another glance at Jack, she smiled in adoration. He truly was a vision. How anyone could abandon this wonderful man was beyond her.

Unable to prevent it, temptation grabbed a hold of her, and she found herself shuffling across. Leaning her body towards him, she tentatively laid her head on his shoulder, keeping her legs folded up tight to her chest, she closed her eyes.

Not long after and she felt him fidget, moving slightly to get more comfortable, before wrapping an arm around her body; holding her towards him and keeping her warm.

With smiles fixed on their faces, they both drifted off into a peaceful sleep; cuddled up feeling safe and warm in the corner of the shed…

I've had so much to catch up on . . . Im so lazy :D

I just loved the way you wrote that part, sheer genius . . .

I agree with Kacie . . .

Martha and Jack . . . SITTING IN A SHED :D K-I-S-S-I-N-G :wub:

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Taking another glance at Jack, she smiled in adoration. He truly was a vision. How anyone could abandon this wonderful man was beyond her.

Unable to prevent it, temptation grabbed a hold of her, and she found herself shuffling across. Leaning her body towards him, she tentatively laid her head on his shoulder, keeping her legs folded up tight to her chest, she closed her eyes.

Not long after and she felt him fidget, moving slightly to get more comfortable, before wrapping an arm around her body; holding her towards him and keeping her warm.

With smiles fixed on their faces, they both drifted off into a peaceful sleep; cuddled up feeling safe and warm in the corner of the shed…

Just so well written :)

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Phew, finally I managed to catch up with this story :P

Anyway, brilliant chapters! Really well written ^_^

And I really, really, really don't like Alec >.< I'd kick him out before he'd get the chance to say "cake" :P

Jack and Martha are getting closer :wub: Now we just have to wait for the kiss and then it's bye bye Alec :D Hopefully...

More please!

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I've had so much to catch up on . . . Im so lazy :D

I just loved the way you wrote that part, sheer genius . . .

I agree with Kacie . . .

Martha and Jack . . . SITTING IN A SHED :D K-I-S-S-I-N-G :wub:

Yeah too right!

Please i'm begging you make them kiss! :wub:

Sorry i haven't reviewed before

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Is powerfullest a word? :huh:

Lol, enough picking. I had two chapters to catch up on, two wonderful chapters.

Aw :wub: Martha's in love with Jack. But no kiss, Rach I'm disappointed.

No Martha won't make her decision. Alec will probably be all sweet and she'll have doubts. Dump him woman.

More please.

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“I mean, how can a person be in love with someone, after less than a week? God, it’s barely been 4 days! It sounds so ridiculous!”

Ridiculous sounds about right :rolleyes: But then again, its Jack. It could have been love at first sight :wub:

So Alec finally decides to spend some time with his fiancee, how lovely. Wedding plans probably, which'll make Martha feel guilty and will decide to stick with Alec :rolleyes: Urgh! I dont like Alec.

Can Martha at least have an affair with Jack?? :P

Great chapter

More please

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