matticus01 Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 WOW . . . Those last two chapters were amazing. . . You are doing an amazing job and writing this chapter hunni . . . especially how they are so wealthy and how they speak in this fic . . . I really dislike Alec . . . Loving Jack . . . He saved Martha Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 "Selfish son of a bitch" sums Alec up just about right Great chapter. Martha is such a sweetie. And a makeover for Jack, yay Does that mean Marthas taking him on a shopping spree?? I hope so More please soon And i like the idea of faster updates Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted July 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Yes! Jack and Martha are getting closer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephyrose4 Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Loved it, YUS Jack gets a makeover i cant wait !! He's gonna look stunning!!! Cant wait for the next update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaitieL Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!! Omg girls, makeover time. Are they like going to have like a sleepover as well. Once Martha sees how hot Jack is, she'll dump that 'son of a bitch'. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaitieL Posted July 9, 2008 Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 As bizarre as it sounded, the dirt that covered his face, the ragged clothes that he wore and his over grown hair, was all a security blanket for him, it kept him hidden at times when most needed, and to have it all taken away … would make him feel almost naked. I certainly wouldn't mind if he was naked. What? No sleepover. Oh honey you are more than 'at least decent'. Wave bye bye to Martha, Alec - she's starting to slip away. Why do I get the feeling that something might happen between Annabelle and Jack and will make Martha jealous. I wonder where he's going to live? More soon please. Oh and can you be a dear and update SS please? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 A sleepover? He gets better! He's going to move in with Martha Right Rach?? Great chapter More soon please, as well as SS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted July 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 I bet Annabelle and Jack hook up He is going to move in with Martha *hopes* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 stupid Alec even when he's not there he causes trouble.. but yay J&M out on the beach.. alone and your updates are coming so quickley i like.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 (edited) Remember the times when I used to update, either once or twice every day (Tash would remember I'm sure ) How i miss those days I like the updates on alternate days. And a great chapter again. Cant wait for their sleepover I want a kiss soon too Dont like Alec More please Edited July 12, 2008 by Tasha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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