Zetti Posted June 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 A Connection! That was so powerfully cute Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 Alec Jack The part where you described Jack drinking the water from the tap made my want to cry I'm glad Martha's not frightened away by the homeless Jack. Really well written Rach! Can't wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valli Posted June 23, 2008 Report Share Posted June 23, 2008 It seems like no one likes Alec I find him amusing. "I can't wait to make you my wife"? Weirdo Anyway, great descriptions! It was like I was there, watching it all from a distance. The part where Jack was drinking from the tap really got me thinking. And it made me want to cry too... Awww, Martha and Jack already have a connection You just can't help yourself, can you Rach? More please! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LisaCarmen Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 I love it, Well done More Please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaitieL Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 Aww... Jack saved her. I don't like Alec much, seems a little too controlling for my liking. And he's wrong, if Martha was with Jack, he would always be there to save her. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 Jack saved Martha. He's a hero. I really don't like Alec. He's so controlling and possessive. Martha is a grown woman. I don't see why she couldn't go out for a walk on her own. Forbidding her to go for a walk will only make her want to go even more. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 Yep, mostly definitely dont like Alec. No one talks to Martha like that But Jack on the other hand He saved her life, he made her feel safe and comfortable, unlike Alec. For that, i love him Great chapter More soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephyrose4 Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 (edited) Alec, **** off will you. Aww Jack saved Martha life, His her hero! Awww 'Nuff said Love this fic.. More please Edited June 25, 2008 by stephyrose4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Say yes Jack. Repeat after me, YES! Hehe, great chapter. Thank God Alec has disappearedo for the day, now Martha can be freeee! More please soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaitieL Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Geez, is Alec her fiance or her father? He's turning out to be a real pr!ck. Yes, say yes Jack. I can just see it, he'll go and he'll be cleaned up all nice and look hot. Martha won't be able to resist. Then Alec will turn up and see it all and leave, forever. I can dream. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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