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Martha's life is very different from Jack's. I wonder how they will meet. :unsure:

Her life is almost like a fairy tale. She has a nice fiancé and (almost) everything she desires. Too bad, she always has to do as she is told. :( But I guess she is used to it.

More please.

PS: Glad to know you had fun on your little holiday even if there was a mouse in your room. :)

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That was absoloutely amazing . . .

I loved how you wrote artha's feelings about wanting to do things for herself instead of being told what to do . . .

And the funny thing is this chapter partly reminded me of Romeo and Juliet but only the two families living in the one area lol . . . :P

Well done . .

Update soon :D

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I am getting very bad at commenting on everyones fics so I thought I'd comment now! :) Dont you just feel privilidged!


Jackys A Tramp :):wub:

Bless him... I wouldnt tell him to move on if I found him by my bin... In fact I'd let him live there!

Martha... Martha Martha Martha!

Alec Mathews is not right for you... Just wait until you meet tramp Jacky!


More Please

Siana x

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Okay, Rach, you're right: That English is seriously annoying :P

Martha's life is sure different from Jack's. I reckon she gets tired of Mr. Perfect and the perfect life and goes to explore the town on her own and then she meets Jack :P

Wonder what happens when she does meet Jack, considering she's engaged :unsure:

More please!

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Alec annoys me too. <_< He acts like he owns Martha. She's a grown woman. She can go for a walk on her own. :rolleyes:

Jack and Martha have seen each other. :) Like Tasha (from BttB :P ) said, they already have a connection. Now they have to talk to each other. :wink:

Glad Martha is nothing like the other people from her world. She's not selfish. She actually cares about other people.

More please.

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