Zetti Posted June 5, 2008 Report Posted June 5, 2008 (edited) Cool. It is Miles' story all over again, its kind of intriguing! I love Jack and the way he scoffed the food down. As long as you dont make Martha his twin sister then I will be happy. Great Start Edited March 11, 2009 by valli Quote
beckyboo Posted June 5, 2008 Report Posted June 5, 2008 Cool. It is Miles' story all over again, its kind of intriguing! Haha iv just said the same thing on msn! hah Wells Rach you tend to go on a bit, and well its not bad lol!!! only joking! But yer im likeing it update soon!! Quote
valli Posted June 5, 2008 Report Posted June 5, 2008 I see you posted the fic The beginning's great It was almost like you could see Jack, like a movie And we all know how fast Rach gets carried away, so we'll see about the max 20 chapters thing Looking forward to more Quote
Barbara Posted June 5, 2008 Report Posted June 5, 2008 Like Zetti and beckyboo said, it's like Miles' story all over again. I feel so sorry for Jack. It seems he had a very hard life. Hopefully he'll have a better life in Summer Bay. As long as you dont make Martha his twin sister then I will be happy. Rachel would never do that. She loves Jack and Martha as a couple. So they won't be twins. Right, Rachel? More please. Quote
Tasha Posted June 5, 2008 Report Posted June 5, 2008 A new fic, how exciting Great start. Jack a hobo, poor thing. Well hopefully SB will do good for him, or maybe a certain someone More please Quote
KaitieL Posted June 6, 2008 Report Posted June 6, 2008 It will be nice to see if Rach can get this done in 20 chapters. The first one was already nice and long. Mmm... dirty and stinky Jack. Not sure if I like the stinky part, but I wouldn't mind the dirty. Rach would never make J&M related, she loves her SC too much between them. Great start. More please. Quote
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted June 6, 2008 Report Posted June 6, 2008 Wow. Great chapter. Poor Jack I feel so sorry for him.. I like the truckie Bring him back. Quote
matticus01 Posted June 6, 2008 Report Posted June 6, 2008 Rach . . . Starting another fic *dances around the table* This should be interesting . . . I loved the way you started it, it was so intriguing and I was hooked straigh away . . . Update soon . . . Jack + Hobo = still Quote
katie343 Posted June 6, 2008 Report Posted June 6, 2008 Love the start!! Please update soon! xx Quote
caitrules Posted June 7, 2008 Report Posted June 7, 2008 Awesome start Rach Jack as a hobo is great, but yeah, dont make them related... My mistake, you already sort of did that in a certain other fic didn't you Quote
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