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Cool. It is Miles' story all over again, its kind of intriguing! I love Jack and the way he scoffed the food down. As long as you dont make Martha his twin sister :P then I will be happy. Great Start :D

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Like Zetti and beckyboo said, it's like Miles' story all over again.

I feel so sorry for Jack. :( It seems he had a very hard life. Hopefully he'll have a better life in Summer Bay.

As long as you dont make Martha his twin sister :P then I will be happy.

Rachel would never do that. She loves Jack and Martha as a couple. So they won't be twins. Right, Rachel? :P

More please.

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It will be nice to see if Rach can get this done in 20 chapters. The first one was already nice and long.

Mmm... dirty and stinky Jack. Not sure if I like the stinky part, but I wouldn't mind the dirty. :wink:

Rach would never make J&M related, she loves her SC too much between them. :P

Great start. More please.

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