maccaz Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Good chapter. Update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anaya Posted July 8, 2008 Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 And she's back and there's 2 whole updates. Yay! Feel so sad for Annie, it's just horrible what she's going through, and I can see why she would be in denial about it all, to begin with. If you don't think about it then you can pretend it's not happening to you. Hope things get better for her and she uses the support from Geoff, Belle etc. Also it was a nice touch giving full details on her cancer in the 1st update. Great research there. Melody/Belle relationship continues to be written perfectly, as is the Mrs Jones/Melody one. It comes across so naturally. So well done there. And finally Adelle makes an appearance, good to see them starting to sort things out. Belle's phone rambling was funny. Can't wait for them meeting at the Den, it better take place in the next chapter, don't dissappoint me on that note. Great stuff, more soon please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted July 9, 2008 Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 Thanks, everyone I'll probably update again tomorrow evening... Chances are I won't get a minutes spare time today. And my dad's coming home for a few days on Friday, so I doubt I'll have a chance to u/d while he's here, maybe though. But I'm going back to the UK with him on Tuesday for a week and a half but I will defo get a chance to update while I'm there. But then again, today might be a slight possibility. Very slight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 almost some adelle. yay. poor annie, that must be horrible for her, and you've done so much research! aren't you a dedicated author, we're so lucky can't wait for more, and hopefully an adelle meeting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Here's a teaser to keep you happy Belle was late. She knew she was as she rushed out of Melody's room, and slammed the front door shut. She didn't have to go see her friend before she went to the Diner, strictly speaking, but she needed advice. But Melody didn't have very much to say. She was engrossed in the internet, looking up information about ALL, which Belle couldn't understand. It would just worry her even more. She just chose to believe what Geoff said, that she'd have surgery and then therapy and then it'd be gone. It was the safer option. Aden was probably gone already. She was half an hour late. God, what was she like? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Great update again, Kat. The reaction by Annie seemed totally realistic - the disbelief, anger, all of it. Secondly, the Belle section was awesome. You write her so well. Rambling to Aden was really cute. Can't wait for their meeting, but given your little teaser I wonder if she will see him at all? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 That's the point of the Teaser. Now while I enjoy my holiday in England you get to wonder about it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Oh no you didn't . . . Yes you did. . . Belle you idiot, hmmmmmmmm Poor annie update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 She's........ SHE'S WHAT ? ? ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Yay, two updates Ch 5: Great chapter. Loved Belle in the supermarket. So like me when I'm having a lazy day, lol. Poor Annie. Only 25% chance. Ch 6: Another great chapter. I feel bad for Geoff. He loves his sister so much. Lol @ Belle on the phone. She is so witty What a way to end the chapter!! She's what?? I want to know, now! What is she?! I'm not going to find out for a while, am I? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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