Tasha Posted May 1, 2007 Report Share Posted May 1, 2007 wow, great chapter. Jack's a hero BUt Martha better survive, she cant die. I hate fics where she dies More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolly-999 Posted May 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2007 wow, this just keeps getting better and better, you've got a real talent for writting. Well done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted May 1, 2007 Report Share Posted May 1, 2007 This is really, really good! Poor Martha I hope she's alright. And Jack. Risking his life to go and save her. What a guy Can't wait for more Pamy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted May 1, 2007 Report Share Posted May 1, 2007 Great chapter. Cant wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted May 1, 2007 Report Share Posted May 1, 2007 Fab chapters Hope you update soon!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted May 1, 2007 Report Share Posted May 1, 2007 Wow, brilliant writing! Very intense and interesting to read. Can't wait for the next chapter - please don't leave it too long. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted May 2, 2007 Report Share Posted May 2, 2007 wow, great chapter. Poor Martha. I like Brooke, kill Cam She better survive More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted May 2, 2007 Report Share Posted May 2, 2007 Aww cute Jack is a hero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted May 2, 2007 Report Share Posted May 2, 2007 Aww, she's a fighter that McKenzie! But, she was shot twice?! Bet that jerk Cam had something to do with it Jack Holden certainly is a hero This fic is really, really good! You write it so well and your style is very unique Hope you update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted May 2, 2007 Report Share Posted May 2, 2007 Aww, she's a fighter that McKenzie! Puja darling shes a Holden This is soo good Update soon xxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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