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“I’ve wanted to do that for so long.” he whispered as he rested his forehead against hers. Matilda only gave a slight nod, still attempting to get her breathing under control.

She couldn’t believe it. She’d just kissed Geoff Campbell which just proved what she'd been feeling all along. She was falling for Geoff Campbell, and there was nothing she could do about it.

that was my favourite bit out of the whole lot of it . . . :wub:

well done and I'm just loving this fic . . . .

:D

update soon . . . :)

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OK. Not sure how many chapters I just read, but I read up to the end of page 5 :lol:

It continues to be a good story :) I like how Belle's the bitch and just how you've totally rewritten some of the characters. Job well done (Y) :P

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“Because no matter what you do to me, I know I’ve still got Geoff. And that was your ultimate goal.” Matilda watched Belle’s reaction in satisfaction, knowing she had won. Belle snorted and turned her gaze to the front of the room, completely ignoring Matilda, so obviously pissed.

Smiling to herself, Matilda also turned her attention back to her teacher in satisfaction. Belle Taylor had nothing on her. Nothing.

that bit was amazing and I lvoed it :D

The way you wrote it was great and Mattie is right . . .

everyone may look at her with pity but she still has geoff on her side :D

I loved it

update soon :)

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