valli Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 I had a lot of catching up to do! Kim is a jerk and can rot in hell I knew that Tasha should never have got involved with him Poor Jack! Who would want to spike his drink? Oh I know! Ranya! She gets a kiss and she hopes that they can get back together. Stupid Ranya! The break-up was her fault and her’s only More please! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*purple*star* Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 Good chapter! Poor Tasha, Kim is a jerk! Not liking him atm!! Ewww not Ranya and Jack again! Please make Jack see that Martha is the one he wants!! Update soon please! Want to find out who Jack chooses?! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 Well I'm glad you are all liking it but i dont think i'm very popular about the ranya kissing jack thing lol but i promise you will find out all you need to know soon enough guys i promise...will post the next chapter soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 am just about to post the next chapter guys n gals Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Channy!!! Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 OH yay! I'll be able to read it when I get home! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 will be posting the next chapter in about ten minutes guys...hope you like them:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 Poor Martha! I hate Ranya! She has to give up and find someone else. Jack doesn't want her anymore. Jack has finally realised his drink had been spiked. Go and tell Ranya what you really think of her! I'm waiting for the next chapter. Those 10 minutes have passed. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valli Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 (edited) Review for chapter 9: Oh perfect! Again Ranya is messing everything up Would someone please remove her?! Martha is being smart, maybe a bit too smart Is Jack and Martha in love? Or is Kim back on the field to tackle Tasha? Review for chapter 10: Yay. *Sings: Martha slapped Ranya, Martha slapped Ranya* No, don’t leave Martha You and Jack are meant to be Robbie and Tasha? Did not see that coming More please! Edited December 4, 2007 by valli Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 I didn't have to wait for long! Ranya just doesn't get it! Kim's single and he's as bad as she is. Why doesn't she hook up with him? Martha slapped her. You go girl! Tasha and Robbie He'll never hurt her, he's sweet. Matilda and Lucas are so cute. Martha's leaving? Oh no! At least, she's coming back. Please update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 well guys its 1 am where i am so im off to bed, will post another chapter tomorrow...promise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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