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^ I agree with Amy (aka *purple*star*).

Ranya shouldn't come back. She's going to cause trouble. :angry:

Jack is so in love with Martha! :wub:

Martha has to get better. She can't have brain damage. :(

The preview about Lucas and Mattie sounds really good. :)

More please.

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here's a sneak peek of the next chapter

“Thank you!” Jack replied as he took Ranya's hand and smiled.

Ranya smiled back at him and put her other hand on top of Jack's and for a second she thought there would be a glimmer of hope for them.

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Matilda had returned home later that evening after getting a message from Lucas and as soon as she arrived out the front of her house she noticed rose petals and fairy lights covering the path leading up to her house. Smiling she made her way up the path and when she arrived at the front door she saw that it was open and what she saw lighted up her eyes like she was a little girl again just unwrapping her Christmas present early in the morning.

hope you like the sneak peek

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here's a sneak peek of the next chapter

“Thank you!” Jack replied as he took Ranya's hand and smiled.

Ranya smiled back at him and put her other hand on top of Jack's and for a second she thought there would be a glimmer of hope for them.

That Ranya dreaming, right?? (Or Jack having a nightmare :P )

Aww Mattie and Luc :wub:

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here's a sneak peek of the next chapter

“Thank you!” Jack replied as he took Ranya's hand and smiled.

Ranya smiled back at him and put her other hand on top of Jack's and for a second she thought there would be a glimmer of hope for them.

That Ranya dreaming, right?? (Or Jack having a nightmare :P )

Tell me *purple*star* is right! That's Ranya dreaming or Jack having a nightmare, right? :unsure:

Love the sneak preview for Mattie and Lucas. :wub:

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I knew it! Ranya was only at the hospital because she felt sorry for herself! <_<

Jack better not be sucked in by her spell again. He loves Martha, not Ranya :wub: And it's Ranya who doesn't deserve Jack, not the other way around <_<

Not liking the sneak peek, well I like the part about Luc and Mattie, but not the part with Jack and Ranya

Hoping that it's Ranya having a dream or Jack having a nightmare :P

Lucas is so sweet, he prepares everything for a romantic night with Mattie :wub:

More please!

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