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Also big ups to Kacie who made a lovely Jack/Martha vid for this story!

You rock my socks!

Hopefully either one of us will post the link to youtube soon!

Can't wait till you guys watch it!

So go on...reply...you know you want to!

oh trust me i do want to reply and i am for that matter, this is such a great fic and i cant believe what such a great writer you are, well done and i cant wait for more :lol:

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The 2 last chapters were really good and well written.

She said yes! :) But then they divorced. :(

They spend a night together. :wub:

Jack was stupid to leave the morning after and Martha was stupid to leave the Bay.

Jack needs to go and find her OR Martha could come back because she's pregnant. :wub: I'm just giving you some ideas. :wink:

Can't wait to see the video and to read the next chapter.

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Chapter 5 – Present

Maybe sometimes you have to stop waiting for someone to come along and fix what’s wrong…maybe you have to stop feeling sorry for yourself and realize that no-one else has the answer. Sometimes you got to be your own hero.

“When I was older I use to be a police woman. I saved Aunty Claire!” Emma announced proudly.

Martha cringed.

As she put down the phone she immediately started throwing clothes into a bag.

Martha’s mind was made up – she would return to Summer Bay for the first time in almost five years since she left.

loved those bits, especially where martha cant look at another poilce man without thinking aobut jack

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